4/21/2007 c27 Marie
I thought your story was really good. some parts seemed a bit far fetched, like how her father kept changing. But that could be sorted by seting up the fact that her father is a bit of a mystery to her at the begining of the story.
I love the way you've developed her changing emotions and mental state, especially in the last few chapters. it makes you understand where she's coming from - and its so sad.
I'll definately look at your other stories.
I thought your story was really good. some parts seemed a bit far fetched, like how her father kept changing. But that could be sorted by seting up the fact that her father is a bit of a mystery to her at the begining of the story.
I love the way you've developed her changing emotions and mental state, especially in the last few chapters. it makes you understand where she's coming from - and its so sad.
I'll definately look at your other stories.
3/25/2007 c27 mo
This is a realy depressing story! but good writing none less!
This is a realy depressing story! but good writing none less!
3/21/2007 c27 1HereThereEveywhereButInMyMind
This took me forever to read, at least 2 and 1/2 hours!... once I found it... after I forgot the name of the story... and had to ask you at lunch the next day... anyway it was awesome! But you keep spelling quiet as "quite". But other than that it was a good read. I wonder if you know who I am...
This took me forever to read, at least 2 and 1/2 hours!... once I found it... after I forgot the name of the story... and had to ask you at lunch the next day... anyway it was awesome! But you keep spelling quiet as "quite". But other than that it was a good read. I wonder if you know who I am...
3/2/2007 c16 britt
im laughing so hard im crying!
im laughing so hard im crying!
3/2/2007 c15 mmm
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3/2/2007 c14 nmhg
hey
Britt
whats that supposesta mean
hey
Britt
whats that supposesta mean
3/2/2007 c13 Guest
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3/2/2007 c12 k
morbid and perverted..i get it now
morbid and perverted..i get it now
3/2/2007 c11 dd
dun dun dun
dun dun dun
3/2/2007 c10 km
um
um
3/2/2007 c9 nmbvg
uh...Morbid much?
uh...Morbid much?
3/2/2007 c8 jgh
who?
who?
3/2/2007 c7 yes
idk what to say
idk what to say
3/2/2007 c6 Brittany
MY ANNOYING SONG!
got my point?
MY ANNOYING SONG!
got my point?