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12/14/2006 c1 36Monochrome Lovers
This poem is pretty good. But it's interesting how it's constructed. You're telling the story from both perspectives correct? It sounds like they know what each other is saying, or for the most part, that the man has the upper hand and knows what the girl is some what thinking. But aside from that they both believe that their doing the other a favor by having sex with them. It's self-serving speach from both sides. Pretty sad. Although they say that they're doing what they do for the other, they're really just doing it for themselves and the idea of what they've made the other person to be. "Nothing good will come of this show" because the characters are disconnected as their sex seems disconnected.

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