for Proof12/14/2006 c1 
306Ashelin
I totally get this poem, and relate to it a lot. The wording is wonderful, and I absolutely love the last lines. Of course, for me it is so ironic...Great job!
-Ashelin
306AshelinI totally get this poem, and relate to it a lot. The wording is wonderful, and I absolutely love the last lines. Of course, for me it is so ironic...Great job!
-Ashelin
12/14/2006 c1 57water lily nymph
ha, this was so cute. very sweet with a nice flow, and light hearted. it made me laugh, nice job. ~*L
57water lily nymphha, this was so cute. very sweet with a nice flow, and light hearted. it made me laugh, nice job. ~*L