
12/31/2006 c7 Mlle Sara
argh! this is immense! the line about acting in the last chapter instantly reminded me of cocteau's 'i'm a lie who speaks the truth'. the imagery in this is beautiful & fits in well with the story, & like your other story, it flows so well.
argh! this is immense! the line about acting in the last chapter instantly reminded me of cocteau's 'i'm a lie who speaks the truth'. the imagery in this is beautiful & fits in well with the story, & like your other story, it flows so well.