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7/21/2008 c1 JB
Fun story, Zane. Whatever happened to Maiden of Starlight? Don't see it on you page anymore. I e-mailed you with a new version of my prologue. Tell me what you think of it.

JB Steelman
12/19/2006 c1 61Kristina Suko
You should separate chapter one from the prologue. I won't read it until you make it another chapter, so I can give it a separate review. I liked the prologue a lot- it is improved much from your earlier writing! Though you're missing a lot of commas. =D

~Maranwe

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