
10/6/2018 c9
13Shailaputri
Though it is kind of rushed, it is a sweet story..Think if you added her background information and how she felt about her mom more that could be more interesting I guess.

Though it is kind of rushed, it is a sweet story..Think if you added her background information and how she felt about her mom more that could be more interesting I guess.
5/29/2018 c9 Guest
Sweet story, though I feel like it could have been better if it was longer!
Sweet story, though I feel like it could have been better if it was longer!
5/17/2012 c1
1PanicAttacker
You wrote "I knew him, he went to school with Lucas and I, and he was in my history class." But it should be "Lucas and me."

You wrote "I knew him, he went to school with Lucas and I, and he was in my history class." But it should be "Lucas and me."
2/2/2012 c9
3Lucy Belle
Once again a story on fictionpress makes me stay up until it's time to wake up. Don't get creeper out, it just means I liked it a lot. It was really cute. And you portrayed the mind of a small girl really well. I liked her

Once again a story on fictionpress makes me stay up until it's time to wake up. Don't get creeper out, it just means I liked it a lot. It was really cute. And you portrayed the mind of a small girl really well. I liked her
1/26/2012 c9
4R. Ficst
So sweet!
Love the characters, the story, and the music that ties it all together. Love it!

So sweet!
Love the characters, the story, and the music that ties it all together. Love it!
5/5/2011 c7 HeartRose
Love this story!
I know u haven't written in a while, but I still hope u finish this story ;)
Love this story!
I know u haven't written in a while, but I still hope u finish this story ;)
12/31/2010 c7 musicluva4eva
this is a good story but r u evr going to complete it?
this is a good story but r u evr going to complete it?
9/4/2009 c6
1UniquelyNeverSeen
hey just wundering if you were still writing this story... i still really want to know the out come... well i hope you update soon...

hey just wundering if you were still writing this story... i still really want to know the out come... well i hope you update soon...
1/31/2009 c7 Hopeless Cliche
Wow.
I can't wait to see what happens.
Hopefully Michelle ends up with Lucas.
No offense to Jason.
Please continue!
Wow.
I can't wait to see what happens.
Hopefully Michelle ends up with Lucas.
No offense to Jason.
Please continue!