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9/16/2007 c1 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Very delicately written, I like. And a wonderful idea too, how you came up with an awesome visual. Great poem.
12/16/2006 c1 heroine007
nice choice of words:) love the way u express ur thoughts.
12/16/2006 c1 322Basara
I'm like you in a way though I don't write diaries...

nice...
12/16/2006 c1 Ethereal October
Very nice...well written, and I could relate. The flow was a bit choppy, to me, at least, but it's not too big of a deal. Still a very good read.
12/16/2006 c1 10hawknick
Hmm, that took me like, 4 times to read before I eventually got it. Me be slow :x

But yeah, it is pretty sad for that poor person. Most likely a girl, since it sounds like a diary, and we all know guys dont do that. But yeah, I feel pity for her, and letting her love life slip by her fingers, and her not seeming to care about it :x

Very well written, good job!

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