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2/15/2007 c3 3echo-of-a-tear
Oh. Mon. Dieu.

If I hadn't been in a library, I would have fallen off my chair, roaring with laughter.

Mister Bobumpkins Swampy Poo! You kill me!

Write more! More! If I don't get more, I shall...erm...atrophy!

~Echo
2/15/2007 c2 echo-of-a-tear
DANTE! You hearkened to Dante! I love you for it!

All in all, if I were to quote everything I loved about this chapter, the page would be sprawling.

One very gentle and not at all offensively meant note, however.

I quote "...as they were rapidly loosing business that they couldn't afford to loose."

It should be spelled "lose" rather than "loose," as "loose" refers to something that is not tight, and "lose" refers to the act of no longer having something.

At any rate, I am off to read the next chapter, and apologize for my extended absence.

~Echo
12/19/2006 c1 echo-of-a-tear
This is absolutely WONDERFUL.

It's well-written, boasts impeccable spelling and grammar (which is so hard to find these days), and is, in a word, utterly hilarious.

~Echo
12/18/2006 c1 1baddboy
That was wonderful! You clearly have an excellent grasp of the English language, although you should really consider paying more attention to quotes and starting a new line WHENEVER a new person speaks. The quality of writing is generally higher than Tommy Chong and you are clearly not bored with the subect. In other words, a GOOD STORY.

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