for Too Young, Too Old The Adolescet Friend1/30/2009 c1 
24fairies and snapple
I like this, like, the overall ideas and the middle part especially. I think some of the rhythm or word choice or whatever could be worked on, eg, "this is because," but overall I liked it a lot.
24fairies and snappleI like this, like, the overall ideas and the middle part especially. I think some of the rhythm or word choice or whatever could be worked on, eg, "this is because," but overall I liked it a lot.