12/14/2007 c14 4January Skies
I'm glad you finally updated! I've been waiting forever! Good chapter.

12/14/2007 c14 7Larentia
I really like your story.

I hope Kylie starts to like Adrian.

12/14/2007 c14 5hi-tanner85
Still very good. I'm glad you updated! please do it again soon.

12/14/2007 c14 5Apiavva
Woot an update!

Interesting Chapter...he should just marry Kylie though

12/9/2007 c13 1arohalove
Honestly, I never read stories like this. I only started because it was on someone's favorites and I'm so glad I did! It amazes me that you're only 16! Your story development is amazing...so is this world you've created. Usually people overload the story with paragraphs of explanations and descriptions of the world but you've mingled it into the narrative so well...along with as the character development. Anyway, I love it. Keep writing please!

Oh! Also, Kylie or Adrian isn't going to hang in the end, are they? The opening chapter seemed to be forshadowing...

11/3/2007 c13 7Randomisation
really good! i love the world you created here and the characters. please continue!

10/29/2007 c13 laughing.through.tears
Wow nice! I wasn't expecting much when I read the summary, but this has blown me away. The characters seem real, which is great in something like this which is often far too cliche. The only thing I don't understand is why Adrian stands for all Kylie's talking back. I would have thought he'd be used to slaves that simply do as they're told, not one that begrudges every order. And he never punishes her; he even brings her presents. Besides that, it's all great. Update again soon. Ciao.