for Hanging by a Thread10/9/2007 c13 
42missmichellini
"beautiful, sassy, naked girl" haha that line was hilarious! :]
keep up the good work!
42missmichellini"beautiful, sassy, naked girl" haha that line was hilarious! :]
keep up the good work!
10/2/2007 c13 Ellabella
Hey,
I hope you've been good. It's been a while since I sent a message. I thought I would this time just tell you about two errors.
“You were far to (TOO) drunk to remember much of anything.”
"Watching those containers as she Adrian’s (AS ADRIAN'S) animated words".
These things slip past in my work all the time too. I just get so used to knowing what my sentences represent that I often glaze over little words when editing. It's like I'm blind to them! Other than those errors your work is fantastic, you're very lucky to have such talent and consistency.
-Ellabella.
Hey,
I hope you've been good. It's been a while since I sent a message. I thought I would this time just tell you about two errors.
“You were far to (TOO) drunk to remember much of anything.”
"Watching those containers as she Adrian’s (AS ADRIAN'S) animated words".
These things slip past in my work all the time too. I just get so used to knowing what my sentences represent that I often glaze over little words when editing. It's like I'm blind to them! Other than those errors your work is fantastic, you're very lucky to have such talent and consistency.
-Ellabella.
10/1/2007 c13 nikkii
L-O-V-E-D IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
L-O-V-E-D IT! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!
10/1/2007 c13 photogirl
it was really good. update soon.
it was really good. update soon.
9/30/2007 c13 1goodbyemylover
i'm so glad you updated!
but i also wish it was longer, because it was SO good.
i think kylies's got a little crush on adrian.
i can't wait till the next chapter.
PLEASE update soon!
1goodbyemyloveri'm so glad you updated!
but i also wish it was longer, because it was SO good.
i think kylies's got a little crush on adrian.
i can't wait till the next chapter.
PLEASE update soon!
9/30/2007 c13 Violettte
FINALLY! lol, you finally updated! I was beginning to lose hope! That's not a nice thing to do to someone! hehe, anyways, great chapter! ^_^
FINALLY! lol, you finally updated! I was beginning to lose hope! That's not a nice thing to do to someone! hehe, anyways, great chapter! ^_^
9/2/2007 c12 42missmichellini
where have you been? you haven't updated for ever so long! . we miss adrian+kylie's story! come back soon ^.^
42missmichelliniwhere have you been? you haven't updated for ever so long! . we miss adrian+kylie's story! come back soon ^.^