
5/21/2007 c11
19Hydie
great description of the dance! I love ballroom dancing myself. Would love to learn a dance like that... :)

great description of the dance! I love ballroom dancing myself. Would love to learn a dance like that... :)
5/21/2007 c11 False-Facade
Yuppers I had to review again =) anyway I like this chapter A LOT so update son dude
Yuppers I had to review again =) anyway I like this chapter A LOT so update son dude
5/20/2007 c11
2BreeJalil
i love it so far! i can't wait to see if she is going to give in or fall for someone else, i like how he is nice but not to soft :) keep up the awsome chapters!

i love it so far! i can't wait to see if she is going to give in or fall for someone else, i like how he is nice but not to soft :) keep up the awsome chapters!
5/20/2007 c11
5hi-tanner85
yes yes yes!
this should be interesting. I'm so excited. I love them both. Even if he does take her without consent and even if she doesn't quite love him yet.

yes yes yes!
this should be interesting. I'm so excited. I love them both. Even if he does take her without consent and even if she doesn't quite love him yet.
5/20/2007 c11
42missmichellini
lol music disk? I confess, that reference kinda ruined the old-fashioned feel the story initially had. Perhaps substitute him humming or something…?
:] I like the Cinderella reference. And I *really* like how their inevitable romance is heating up!
Once again, good work :D

lol music disk? I confess, that reference kinda ruined the old-fashioned feel the story initially had. Perhaps substitute him humming or something…?
:] I like the Cinderella reference. And I *really* like how their inevitable romance is heating up!
Once again, good work :D
5/20/2007 c11 w0lfgangx
hi, I love you story so far. But I was just wondering why the chapters are so short? Anyway, update soon!
hi, I love you story so far. But I was just wondering why the chapters are so short? Anyway, update soon!