for Hanging by a Thread5/17/2007 c10 BlueAndBooks
Please update. This story is amazing. Very, very amazing. I can't wait for you to write more. Well, technically, I can wait, I just don't want to. And I'm finding it very, very difficult to wait. So please update soon. Very soon. Please.
Oh, and just to point out one little error, "eyelids hiding that her empty stare." It's not quite proper wording. That's it. Well, I'm sure that's not it, and that there are other mistakes in this story as well, but that's the only one that really stood out.
So now, please update.
Please update. This story is amazing. Very, very amazing. I can't wait for you to write more. Well, technically, I can wait, I just don't want to. And I'm finding it very, very difficult to wait. So please update soon. Very soon. Please.
Oh, and just to point out one little error, "eyelids hiding that her empty stare." It's not quite proper wording. That's it. Well, I'm sure that's not it, and that there are other mistakes in this story as well, but that's the only one that really stood out.
So now, please update.
5/12/2007 c4 Madame MEB
OK. Adrian sounded hot on the first part (1st scence with him in it), but in the second and third part, i really hated him. I hoped he would respect her wishes and then realize that he doesn't need courtesans, but her. BUT i know that it won't happen...MEB
OK. Adrian sounded hot on the first part (1st scence with him in it), but in the second and third part, i really hated him. I hoped he would respect her wishes and then realize that he doesn't need courtesans, but her. BUT i know that it won't happen...MEB
5/4/2007 c10 
32FATEpending
Just thumbed through all the the chapters- this is a really beautiful story. It caught my attention from the summary on, and the way you phrase things just keeps me on my toes. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so hurry! :-)
32FATEpendingJust thumbed through all the the chapters- this is a really beautiful story. It caught my attention from the summary on, and the way you phrase things just keeps me on my toes. I can't wait to read the next chapter, so hurry! :-)
4/28/2007 c10 1Enaid
they are pretty cute together. especially now that he isnt pushing her too hard. i think that them just being friends for now is a good thing, but the festival week shall be interesting. as always update soon.
1Enaidthey are pretty cute together. especially now that he isnt pushing her too hard. i think that them just being friends for now is a good thing, but the festival week shall be interesting. as always update soon.
4/26/2007 c10 cherry eyes
i really like your story. I hope to read more soon.
cheers
i really like your story. I hope to read more soon.
cheers
4/26/2007 c10 Elizabeth
I really like your story. It is getting more interesting with every chapter !
I really like your story. It is getting more interesting with every chapter !
4/26/2007 c10 Kara
Pls update soon! i'm checking this site 7 days a week jus to see if u hav updated. i luv ur story!
Pls update soon! i'm checking this site 7 days a week jus to see if u hav updated. i luv ur story!