for Hanging by a Thread4/23/2007 c9 
1Enaid
poor Kylie i agree he shouldnt have burst her bubble so fast cant wait for the next update
1Enaidpoor Kylie i agree he shouldnt have burst her bubble so fast cant wait for the next update
4/23/2007 c9 1ind-fam
You have what many authors on this site and market are lacking. Sense of being subtle. Once again lovely chapter and story.
keep writing...
1ind-famYou have what many authors on this site and market are lacking. Sense of being subtle. Once again lovely chapter and story.
keep writing...
4/19/2007 c9 6givelifeyurall
hey, god job on this, the flow of it is wonderful like i'm actually reading a book in a store. and i like buffy the vampire slayer too! i've been trying to watch all the re-runs. do you like Angel?
6givelifeyurallhey, god job on this, the flow of it is wonderful like i'm actually reading a book in a store. and i like buffy the vampire slayer too! i've been trying to watch all the re-runs. do you like Angel?
4/19/2007 c9 1fallen angel broken wings
i like this. i always just feel the need to throw something really hard against a wall when i'm upset, so i can totally understand.
1fallen angel broken wingsi like this. i always just feel the need to throw something really hard against a wall when i'm upset, so i can totally understand.
4/19/2007 c9 5hi-tanner85
aw that poor girl.
ugh. its sucks that i love adrian and loathe him at the same time. youre awesome, keep it up.
5hi-tanner85aw that poor girl.
ugh. its sucks that i love adrian and loathe him at the same time. youre awesome, keep it up.
4/19/2007 c9 7E. Liz Collins
I haven't been on fictionpress in forever. None of the stories I came across interested me. But when I started reading yours, I was hooked from the very beginning! Can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update soon!
7E. Liz CollinsI haven't been on fictionpress in forever. None of the stories I came across interested me. But when I started reading yours, I was hooked from the very beginning! Can't wait to read the next chapter, so please update soon!
4/19/2007 c9 3phelps112
poor thing. She just wants to go home. Why is he so focused on her anyway? Just because she keeps refusing him? It would be kind of funny if somehow the infertility drugs didn't work and she did get pregnant. Good writing, keep going.
3phelps112poor thing. She just wants to go home. Why is he so focused on her anyway? Just because she keeps refusing him? It would be kind of funny if somehow the infertility drugs didn't work and she did get pregnant. Good writing, keep going.
4/18/2007 c9 11My Chemical Music Box
It's funny because, it's kind of an old-fashioned setting but they use modern(ish) language like f**k. It's good though `cause it keeps it interesting.
Update soon!
11My Chemical Music BoxIt's funny because, it's kind of an old-fashioned setting but they use modern(ish) language like f**k. It's good though `cause it keeps it interesting.
Update soon!