for Hanging by a Thread3/3/2007 c6 
1Enaid
o its getting really good. i think im liking this one teh best of your stories. if he stopped forcing Kylie i bet she would start liking him.
i think you should also give more details about Charlotte and Marissa, about what they do during the time they arent... entertaining Adrian. talk about where they come from yadda yadda
update soon
1Enaido its getting really good. i think im liking this one teh best of your stories. if he stopped forcing Kylie i bet she would start liking him.
i think you should also give more details about Charlotte and Marissa, about what they do during the time they arent... entertaining Adrian. talk about where they come from yadda yadda
update soon
2/22/2007 c1 ChronicLaziness
This was a good chapter, but there were some spelling errors and grammar mistakes.
More description would've been better too.
This was a good chapter, but there were some spelling errors and grammar mistakes.
More description would've been better too.
2/22/2007 c6 bellabewitched
this is a very good story!
I like how you tell the thoughts from several perspectives
this is a very good story!
I like how you tell the thoughts from several perspectives
2/18/2007 c6 3Sinor
Yay for plot thickening! This story is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!
3SinorYay for plot thickening! This story is really good and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon please!
2/17/2007 c1 Cheerful
I luv your story!please continue soon
I luv your story!please continue soon
2/16/2007 c6 5hi-tanner85
OH joy joy joy! Loved it as usual. This chapter was exceptionally wonderful, especially the part at the very end. Strawberry finger kisses. YAY! Officially one of the top 5 favorite stories on this site. KEEP IT UP PLEASE.
5hi-tanner85OH joy joy joy! Loved it as usual. This chapter was exceptionally wonderful, especially the part at the very end. Strawberry finger kisses. YAY! Officially one of the top 5 favorite stories on this site. KEEP IT UP PLEASE.
2/16/2007 c6 42missmichellini
this is really excellent work! i love the character development. and kylie is so feisty! the characters are so believable.
the only thing that sort of got me wondering is, if adrian is so goodlooking why does he have to have sex slaves? He could find willing ladies in whatever court he went to.
ah well. convenience, i suppose...
“As Lord Anawar’s official whores, I think both you and I have lost any chance at decency.”
42missmichellinithis is really excellent work! i love the character development. and kylie is so feisty! the characters are so believable.
the only thing that sort of got me wondering is, if adrian is so goodlooking why does he have to have sex slaves? He could find willing ladies in whatever court he went to.
ah well. convenience, i suppose...
“As Lord Anawar’s official whores, I think both you and I have lost any chance at decency.”