
8/22/2011 c4
1bookADDICT6
At first I thought Adrian was bit nice. Nicer than most. But everyone knows a guy will act to get some. I still think he's the nicest out of all men so far.

At first I thought Adrian was bit nice. Nicer than most. But everyone knows a guy will act to get some. I still think he's the nicest out of all men so far.
8/22/2011 c3 bookADDICT6
And to think that I thought the general was a bit nicer. How much more wrong can I be? What is the time period or estimated time period?
And to think that I thought the general was a bit nicer. How much more wrong can I be? What is the time period or estimated time period?
8/22/2011 c2 bookADDICT6
Okay, so I'm changing my opinion quickly. I'm still revolted at the idea of slaves, but I like the idea of the story so I'm going to keep reading. I thought the General was nice compared to other soldiers, wrong.
Okay, so I'm changing my opinion quickly. I'm still revolted at the idea of slaves, but I like the idea of the story so I'm going to keep reading. I thought the General was nice compared to other soldiers, wrong.
8/22/2011 c1 bookADDICT6
I've got to say, I had my doubts because I don't really like slave based stories. This one though, has changed my mind. Normally, I would find it awful to read, but not so.
I've got to say, I had my doubts because I don't really like slave based stories. This one though, has changed my mind. Normally, I would find it awful to read, but not so.
2/22/2011 c21
12Moonlite Star
i enjoyed this story...though it doesn't look like there will be any updates anytime soon. i hope you can finish this one day. it has been an interesting read. thanks for sharing.

i enjoyed this story...though it doesn't look like there will be any updates anytime soon. i hope you can finish this one day. it has been an interesting read. thanks for sharing.
8/10/2010 c21
2InvisibleOrphan
What no more? I was getting into this story although I'm a bit upset with how she's changed character even though I totally understand why. I hope you continue.

What no more? I was getting into this story although I'm a bit upset with how she's changed character even though I totally understand why. I hope you continue.
7/6/2010 c21 messing
I wish you would finish this its so wonderful
I wish you would finish this its so wonderful
6/2/2010 c2
2charmedgirl23
this is a very great and wonderful good story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it and its really good to read too! your a wonderful good great awesome author who wrote this very great wonderful good story!

this is a very great and wonderful good story that i love and like a lot since i first started reading it and its really good to read too! your a wonderful good great awesome author who wrote this very great wonderful good story!
3/28/2010 c4
10Sabreal
That SOB!
Handsome or not, rape is still rape.
If he were old and pot-bellied, will Kylie fall in love with Adrian like I presume she will, later on?
I doubt it.
You write well anyways.

That SOB!
Handsome or not, rape is still rape.
If he were old and pot-bellied, will Kylie fall in love with Adrian like I presume she will, later on?
I doubt it.
You write well anyways.
3/20/2010 c21
1Hateful Loving
I know you have not updated for over a year but I'm hoping really hoping you will update soon because I would really love to see what happens next. Please update soon :)
HaTeFuL LoViNg

I know you have not updated for over a year but I'm hoping really hoping you will update soon because I would really love to see what happens next. Please update soon :)
HaTeFuL LoViNg
2/14/2010 c19 WithEveryReason
Ugh, I can't read this anymore. I hate the stupid wh ore Kylie turned into to.
It's sickening.
Ugh, I can't read this anymore. I hate the stupid wh ore Kylie turned into to.
It's sickening.
12/1/2009 c20
1LoneWhitewolf
"An orange snow storm on her lap,"
Ha, ha, I love the way you write.
It's very...uniquely descriptive.
Great job ^-^

"An orange snow storm on her lap,"
Ha, ha, I love the way you write.
It's very...uniquely descriptive.
Great job ^-^
11/11/2009 c21
1Jinxed Rogue
I really really enjoyed this story. Your characters are smart, sharp and multi-dimensional. The plot is very interesting and a bit unconventional, in the way the characters react to their situations.
I hope you eventually come back and finish it!

I really really enjoyed this story. Your characters are smart, sharp and multi-dimensional. The plot is very interesting and a bit unconventional, in the way the characters react to their situations.
I hope you eventually come back and finish it!