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1/16/2007 c1 144chaos called creation
I could actually see this. The contrast was amazing, and the ending was so sweet.
1/10/2007 c1 63lackluster
the imagery and lingering thoughts are really great. the ending line in particular has a nice effect. short and sweet yet it has a nice 'punch' to it, kinda makes me wonder what else you have to say. i guess in a way it feels unfinished, but it's the lovely kind of unfinished that you can live with.

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