for Mafias are Good at Keeping Secrets5/28/2013 c17 Guest
SETH IS EVIL! EVIL! EVIL! EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!
SETH IS EVIL! EVIL! EVIL! EVIL! EVIL! EVIL!
5/13/2013 c22 
2Phantom Tigress
U had me so freaking emotional! I love this story! Damn this girly side of me for making me squeal and do other girly reactions¡!
2Phantom TigressU had me so freaking emotional! I love this story! Damn this girly side of me for making me squeal and do other girly reactions¡!
5/5/2013 c22 Samantha Louise
So, I cheated and skipped to the last 2 chapters. So, I don't know if I was right before if Mason was part of it. Seth wasn't part of it. And I kinda thought that her father was an imposter because a real father wouldn't give up his kid.
So, I cheated and skipped to the last 2 chapters. So, I don't know if I was right before if Mason was part of it. Seth wasn't part of it. And I kinda thought that her father was an imposter because a real father wouldn't give up his kid.
5/5/2013 c17 Samtnah Lousie
Seth! Seth! Seth! Seth! Seth! O MY GOSH! I sorta suspected Mason first, but then Seth has been coming in and... Goin to teh nexzt chapter!
Seth! Seth! Seth! Seth! Seth! O MY GOSH! I sorta suspected Mason first, but then Seth has been coming in and... Goin to teh nexzt chapter!
5/5/2013 c16 Samantha Louise
Did Mason have blue eyes?
Did Mason have blue eyes?
3/17/2013 c1 Orange Camel
When you refered to the blond mothers hair color in the first chapter the correct spelling of the word is 'dyed' instead of died but I must admit the story is qwite entertaining
When you refered to the blond mothers hair color in the first chapter the correct spelling of the word is 'dyed' instead of died but I must admit the story is qwite entertaining
2/12/2013 c3 na
one word: stupid
one word: stupid
12/23/2012 c1 1Lily806
you spelled a few things wrong...and honestly when you said her mother had platinum blonde hair obviously 'died' i was like: ...?
it's supposed to be 'dyed'
1Lily806you spelled a few things wrong...and honestly when you said her mother had platinum blonde hair obviously 'died' i was like: ...?
it's supposed to be 'dyed'
12/31/2011 c22 Nothing But A Dreamer
I have to say that's beautiful but somehow, in the last part...I feel dissatisfied. I felt like the climax, where Mason's plan along with unveiling of truth, was too fast. I don't know. I'm not an expert or something. However, at the start until the climax part, I was hooked. I was so excited for everything. It was a very good. It's just the last 2 or 3 chapter that started to...disturb me.
Thank you for your story. Thank you so much for posting this.
I have to say that's beautiful but somehow, in the last part...I feel dissatisfied. I felt like the climax, where Mason's plan along with unveiling of truth, was too fast. I don't know. I'm not an expert or something. However, at the start until the climax part, I was hooked. I was so excited for everything. It was a very good. It's just the last 2 or 3 chapter that started to...disturb me.
Thank you for your story. Thank you so much for posting this.