for Goodnight1/16/2008 c1 
164Lady Fingers
usually, i don't like poems that rhyme, but this is one of the best i've read so far.
keep writing!
164Lady Fingersusually, i don't like poems that rhyme, but this is one of the best i've read so far.
keep writing!
5/13/2007 c1 74laughter at the funeral
wow, nice lines are like sprinkled all over this piece...
"and a prince waiting by your throne"
&
"breaths that can't leave your chest"
i liked those lines...
truly youes...
74laughter at the funeralwow, nice lines are like sprinkled all over this piece...
"and a prince waiting by your throne"
&
"breaths that can't leave your chest"
i liked those lines...
truly youes...
12/20/2006 c1 21Choke on this
sweet. love "Platinum hoops whip across your ears.
Substitute ale with premium beer" within the princess allusion. very well written
21Choke on thissweet. love "Platinum hoops whip across your ears.
Substitute ale with premium beer" within the princess allusion. very well written