for Paladin12/27/2006 c3 relyn
Ooh, a rewrite! I love the beginning, by the way- "life is a series of what-ifs". It's intriguing. =D
And I still love the sarcasm. Nyahahahaa. I see changes, though. 'Tis interesting. -nodnod-
Update soon!
Ooh, a rewrite! I love the beginning, by the way- "life is a series of what-ifs". It's intriguing. =D
And I still love the sarcasm. Nyahahahaa. I see changes, though. 'Tis interesting. -nodnod-
Update soon!
12/26/2006 c3 
9SapphireIris
A rewrite, huh? I'll keep in touch about it... but only if you update!
-SapphireIris
9SapphireIrisA rewrite, huh? I'll keep in touch about it... but only if you update!
-SapphireIris
12/25/2006 c3 1For What Its Worth
Very intriguing and well-written. I would love to join your club, as well. The sarcasm and witty comebacks definitely suit Casey. But when she goes back ,does anyone notice shes been gone?
1For What Its WorthVery intriguing and well-written. I would love to join your club, as well. The sarcasm and witty comebacks definitely suit Casey. But when she goes back ,does anyone notice shes been gone?
12/25/2006 c3 6WordSarien
I'm sorry it took so long to review- - -it's been kind of insane around here, and I've been procrastinating. *blushes* (My fault for trying to do too many things at once. . . .)
Anyways, lol, Casey and Irian's first meeting still cracks me up. :P It's rather ironic- - -
Mark: Shh! Does the word "spoilers" mean anything to you?
Me: . . .As much as I can't believe you care and I can't believe I'm saying this, you're right. Anyways, I really LOVE the "Life is a series of what-ifs" thing you have the beginning. AWESOME! :D
I'm afraid I have to go now (:(), so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (BTW, if any more reviews are delayed, it's probably because the author alert setting doesn't seem to be working right now.)
~Elicael, Fire Sarien~
6WordSarienI'm sorry it took so long to review- - -it's been kind of insane around here, and I've been procrastinating. *blushes* (My fault for trying to do too many things at once. . . .)
Anyways, lol, Casey and Irian's first meeting still cracks me up. :P It's rather ironic- - -
Mark: Shh! Does the word "spoilers" mean anything to you?
Me: . . .As much as I can't believe you care and I can't believe I'm saying this, you're right. Anyways, I really LOVE the "Life is a series of what-ifs" thing you have the beginning. AWESOME! :D
I'm afraid I have to go now (:(), so PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (BTW, if any more reviews are delayed, it's probably because the author alert setting doesn't seem to be working right now.)
~Elicael, Fire Sarien~
12/24/2006 c3 4Nathan K
WOW...I was not expecting this, but it rocks! I love, firstoff, the format that you use, the back and forth from different perspectives is a great way, and I love how you've made that idea your own. Great story so far (read chapter 1) I really like where its going :-)
Good work grammatically and no spelling errors as far as I could see.
Keep Writing!
-Nathan K
4Nathan KWOW...I was not expecting this, but it rocks! I love, firstoff, the format that you use, the back and forth from different perspectives is a great way, and I love how you've made that idea your own. Great story so far (read chapter 1) I really like where its going :-)
Good work grammatically and no spelling errors as far as I could see.
Keep Writing!
-Nathan K
12/23/2006 c1 32Mayaj
Ooh you're posting this again? hee, gives me an excuse to read it again!
btw, I didn't get an alert for this(read on yer Da Journal), which proves FP is being shitty once again. I posted the new AHK chapter a few days ago, and I think no one got alerted. Gonna go read now before I fall asleep in the computer chair!
32MayajOoh you're posting this again? hee, gives me an excuse to read it again!
btw, I didn't get an alert for this(read on yer Da Journal), which proves FP is being shitty once again. I posted the new AHK chapter a few days ago, and I think no one got alerted. Gonna go read now before I fall asleep in the computer chair!
12/23/2006 c1 1LittleRedRodeo
If I'm not mistaken, "paladin" is also a Native American word (I forget which tribe) meaning "figther." I think. But I'll just have to read on to see how you use it :)
1LittleRedRodeoIf I'm not mistaken, "paladin" is also a Native American word (I forget which tribe) meaning "figther." I think. But I'll just have to read on to see how you use it :)
12/23/2006 c3 140E.B. Keane-Farrell
coolness. haha..."Kyar" is one letter short of "Kyara"! =-o great minds think alike, and even greater minds think even more alike! (don't ask)
140E.B. Keane-Farrellcoolness. haha..."Kyar" is one letter short of "Kyara"! =-o great minds think alike, and even greater minds think even more alike! (don't ask)
12/23/2006 c2 E.B. Keane-Farrell
sweet! Haha I'm reading this! yay!
I like it so far =) I'm gonna go off and read the next chapter.
sweet! Haha I'm reading this! yay!
I like it so far =) I'm gonna go off and read the next chapter.