for Vampire: Chapter 112/28/2006 c1 
4Rayet Wolf
Short chapter, sweet and to the point. Pretty good but just remember to spell check. Otherwise, I see an interesting story of horror and the weird approaching
4Rayet WolfShort chapter, sweet and to the point. Pretty good but just remember to spell check. Otherwise, I see an interesting story of horror and the weird approaching
12/23/2006 c1 58Inkspilled
It's interesting, but some parts used the wrong grammer. "...going on since me very young.." It should be 'since I was very young' or something. But that's it, the storyline begininng is good and interesting. Keep writing, sounds like it could be a long story...:)
58InkspilledIt's interesting, but some parts used the wrong grammer. "...going on since me very young.." It should be 'since I was very young' or something. But that's it, the storyline begininng is good and interesting. Keep writing, sounds like it could be a long story...:)