12/23/2006 c1 20S.J.Jones
My favorite line was, "I riddle through my past for the exact moment when I betrayed myself." because I wonder that about myself all the time. This was very, very well-written, I was pleasantly suprised. It made me want to keep reading and keep reading more.
My favorite line was, "I riddle through my past for the exact moment when I betrayed myself." because I wonder that about myself all the time. This was very, very well-written, I was pleasantly suprised. It made me want to keep reading and keep reading more.
12/23/2006 c2 5Ladiebug
You write about your life in such a flowing, natural way, I can only see the career as writer somewhere in your future. It's surprising to me, that someone out there on this planet has actually felt and thought some of the exact things I have and put them into words. I couldn't have written it better.
You write about your life in such a flowing, natural way, I can only see the career as writer somewhere in your future. It's surprising to me, that someone out there on this planet has actually felt and thought some of the exact things I have and put them into words. I couldn't have written it better.