for Three Years8/25/2017 c1 serwaverider
I think, in my opinion, it ends too early. After imagining the built up frustration of your boyfriend in a coma for 3 years, then he doesn't know you? Great build up but I want more "resolution," to balance the scales so to speak.
I think, in my opinion, it ends too early. After imagining the built up frustration of your boyfriend in a coma for 3 years, then he doesn't know you? Great build up but I want more "resolution," to balance the scales so to speak.
9/27/2013 c1 Justaname
I one of your stories back when I was in high school, and I recently re-read it and it was still amazing. Some things lose their appeal after a while, but your writing is so natural feeling and beautiful I highly doubt that ever happens to you. This was another favorite of mine from you. I'd buy a book of one shots or a short novel out whatever from you. Get something published, at least something small that all your fans would appreciate.
I one of your stories back when I was in high school, and I recently re-read it and it was still amazing. Some things lose their appeal after a while, but your writing is so natural feeling and beautiful I highly doubt that ever happens to you. This was another favorite of mine from you. I'd buy a book of one shots or a short novel out whatever from you. Get something published, at least something small that all your fans would appreciate.
4/2/2013 c1 allancaldera
Amazing I really like it was sweet but at the same time it was sad.I am almost crying.
Amazing I really like it was sweet but at the same time it was sad.I am almost crying.
10/28/2012 c1 Person
Okay, here's what I think: Why'd you stop there?! It is an awesome story, and quite well done. Then again, it is actually ended quite well, too, but cliffhangers suck. The funny thing is is that I had a story forming today that had the main character in a coma and/or with amnesia. XD The world works in funny ways...Don't worry, though, I won't copy your story. It's awesome and such, and there is room for a sequel...*hinhint*...? Well, well done!
Okay, here's what I think: Why'd you stop there?! It is an awesome story, and quite well done. Then again, it is actually ended quite well, too, but cliffhangers suck. The funny thing is is that I had a story forming today that had the main character in a coma and/or with amnesia. XD The world works in funny ways...Don't worry, though, I won't copy your story. It's awesome and such, and there is room for a sequel...*hinhint*...? Well, well done!
10/26/2011 c1 minxx
Good reading... the ending was sweet and no doubt their love story is going to continue...wish it was longer though, sequel maybe?
Good reading... the ending was sweet and no doubt their love story is going to continue...wish it was longer though, sequel maybe?
10/16/2011 c1 
1The Elusive Miss Turrey
Oh my goodness this was absoloutely beautiful! I wish this story was more than a one-shot, but maybe that would ruin it. Agh, idunno, but I really love stories like this! By the way, totally stalking your profile for other stories. This is the second story I've read, forgot what the other one was called. Main character was Winter. I love the unusual names you have for characters. I like months or seasons or some other elemental crap as female and especially male names.
1The Elusive Miss TurreyOh my goodness this was absoloutely beautiful! I wish this story was more than a one-shot, but maybe that would ruin it. Agh, idunno, but I really love stories like this! By the way, totally stalking your profile for other stories. This is the second story I've read, forgot what the other one was called. Main character was Winter. I love the unusual names you have for characters. I like months or seasons or some other elemental crap as female and especially male names.
6/27/2011 c1 miss-reads-alot
Awww! I loved it. Near the end I was thinking it was going to be a tragedy, but then it's like how they met all over again. So, I believe that everything will be just ok with them. Great read. Keep on typing!
Awww! I loved it. Near the end I was thinking it was going to be a tragedy, but then it's like how they met all over again. So, I believe that everything will be just ok with them. Great read. Keep on typing!
4/25/2011 c1 1moon01234
I'm sounding redoundant but sequel please? You have got to stop at the oneshots like this.
1moon01234I'm sounding redoundant but sequel please? You have got to stop at the oneshots like this.
2/12/2011 c1 Singing Cats
I like their dialogue at the end. It's like they're meeting each other for the first time. All over again.
Anyway, this was a very touching story. Thank you for the exposure.
I like their dialogue at the end. It's like they're meeting each other for the first time. All over again.
Anyway, this was a very touching story. Thank you for the exposure.
1/29/2011 c1 Mars And KitKat
Aw sad but i love it! U r a VERY talanted writer and I love ur stories! Keep writing
Aw sad but i love it! U r a VERY talanted writer and I love ur stories! Keep writing
5/18/2010 c1 19Chrona4Shirotsubaki
Oh, that was beautiful! Blissfully sad and wonderful. Needless to say that I loved it with much affections!
19Chrona4ShirotsubakiOh, that was beautiful! Blissfully sad and wonderful. Needless to say that I loved it with much affections!
5/11/2010 c1 27x-ClinicallyInsane-x
I cried (though that may have been my body going 'get to sleep, it's three in the morning').
It was really bad because I was listening to 'The Rose' and it made it even worse, 'cause that's a really sad song to me.
But I'm so glad you put a little light at the end, it became happy-ish crying, if you know what I mean.
27x-ClinicallyInsane-xI cried (though that may have been my body going 'get to sleep, it's three in the morning').
It was really bad because I was listening to 'The Rose' and it made it even worse, 'cause that's a really sad song to me.
But I'm so glad you put a little light at the end, it became happy-ish crying, if you know what I mean.
3/7/2010 c1 1Beat Backbone
AH! Oh my god. This is perfection(: The ending just made me cry. So thanks!:)
1Beat BackboneAH! Oh my god. This is perfection(: The ending just made me cry. So thanks!:)