6/26/2008 c9 1Jevanminx
Oh will she join the organisation, and yeah shoulda guessed they would wire his aparetment, hehehehe.
JM
Oh will she join the organisation, and yeah shoulda guessed they would wire his aparetment, hehehehe.
JM
6/26/2008 c9 MK16
YAY
AN UPDATE
i REALLY love this story
the whole assassin stories are my favourites :D
keep it up
i hope u have a new chappie soon!
^.^
YAY
AN UPDATE
i REALLY love this story
the whole assassin stories are my favourites :D
keep it up
i hope u have a new chappie soon!
^.^
6/26/2008 c9 13Natajaaay
oh my GOD! she's gunna have to become an assassin? and geez, tyler had anger issues...but i still like him. i like sean too, he's a cute character lol
oh my GOD! she's gunna have to become an assassin? and geez, tyler had anger issues...but i still like him. i like sean too, he's a cute character lol
6/25/2008 c8 Natajaaay
this is so well written! i really hope the next chapter comes out soon, even though you're under pressure updating your other stories. i think it's a shame that more people haven't read this.
this is so well written! i really hope the next chapter comes out soon, even though you're under pressure updating your other stories. i think it's a shame that more people haven't read this.
9/11/2007 c8 10i found nemo
First of all, I'm definitely loving your story so far. It is so not what you normally read on this site and everything seems to flow pretty well. My only suggestion is maybe you should change the title-there's nothing wrong with it, but it's kind of vague and doesn't really reflect the rest of your story. The summary is what made me want to read the story. But that's just a suggestion, so don't feel like you have to change it.
Great job so far and I'll definitely keep reading!
First of all, I'm definitely loving your story so far. It is so not what you normally read on this site and everything seems to flow pretty well. My only suggestion is maybe you should change the title-there's nothing wrong with it, but it's kind of vague and doesn't really reflect the rest of your story. The summary is what made me want to read the story. But that's just a suggestion, so don't feel like you have to change it.
Great job so far and I'll definitely keep reading!
9/11/2007 c8 10A Different Kind of Yellow
Argh! What annoyance! I quite like this story, actually, a little rushed, but fantastic otherwise (don't get me wrong about that!). Would she really help kill her own father? Little serious, but I guess if I had a bastard dad like that I'd maybe want to as well. Or just change my name and get as far away from him as possible. Right well, looking forward to your next update!
Argh! What annoyance! I quite like this story, actually, a little rushed, but fantastic otherwise (don't get me wrong about that!). Would she really help kill her own father? Little serious, but I guess if I had a bastard dad like that I'd maybe want to as well. Or just change my name and get as far away from him as possible. Right well, looking forward to your next update!
9/11/2007 c8 camila
I really thought they were gonna kiss. I like this chapter because he tell her the true and she doesn't care and want to help. This is a nice chapter. Please updated soon.
I really thought they were gonna kiss. I like this chapter because he tell her the true and she doesn't care and want to help. This is a nice chapter. Please updated soon.
9/11/2007 c8 MK16
OMG! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
ARgh! its totally awsome and the plot rules XD NAWW! they like each other!
BLOODY DOOR BELL! -profanities bursting out from mouth-
hehe. damn! so close though! haha great job! keep it up and UPDATE SOON! =P
~RL~
OMG! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!
ARgh! its totally awsome and the plot rules XD NAWW! they like each other!
BLOODY DOOR BELL! -profanities bursting out from mouth-
hehe. damn! so close though! haha great job! keep it up and UPDATE SOON! =P
~RL~