for Love Kills9/1/2007 c7 Reader Person xD
Go Tyler! xD
Chealsey has a lot of problems, eh? An abusive ex, an abusive father.. Hm, poor her. The weird part is she always acts so tough when she's so vulnerable. Most people in her situation would be shy, closed off or something like that. Wouldn't they be? It makes the story all the more interesting. I guess Robert Hayes is no more. And we only just met him. That's fine because I don't need to learn more about him. Once again, Go Tyler! =]
Go Tyler! xD
Chealsey has a lot of problems, eh? An abusive ex, an abusive father.. Hm, poor her. The weird part is she always acts so tough when she's so vulnerable. Most people in her situation would be shy, closed off or something like that. Wouldn't they be? It makes the story all the more interesting. I guess Robert Hayes is no more. And we only just met him. That's fine because I don't need to learn more about him. Once again, Go Tyler! =]
8/29/2007 c7 
29damsel in desperation
ooh, the damsel likes it a lot.
please continue, though.
I'M DYING HERE!
29damsel in desperationooh, the damsel likes it a lot.
please continue, though.
I'M DYING HERE!
8/29/2007 c7 Nadinerdrgz
AW THAT WAS SWEET BUT CRAZY HE KILLED HIM FOR HER WOW HE LIKEING HER AND THEY DONT KNOW IT I LIKE IT DO SOME MORE SOON :)
AW THAT WAS SWEET BUT CRAZY HE KILLED HIM FOR HER WOW HE LIKEING HER AND THEY DONT KNOW IT I LIKE IT DO SOME MORE SOON :)
8/28/2007 c7 1HumanInfiltrator
Faster updates due to reviews? OK then, here is another. This girl has so much trouble! Hopefully she is finally getting a break. Can't wait to read more!
1HumanInfiltratorFaster updates due to reviews? OK then, here is another. This girl has so much trouble! Hopefully she is finally getting a break. Can't wait to read more!
8/28/2007 c7 euphorictragedy
Hm... Tyler is hot. I mean, how can you not fall for a guy that rescues you and not once, but twice? Seriously. I know it's kind of his job but hey, I wouldn't be complaining. I really like this chapter so please update soon!
Hm... Tyler is hot. I mean, how can you not fall for a guy that rescues you and not once, but twice? Seriously. I know it's kind of his job but hey, I wouldn't be complaining. I really like this chapter so please update soon!
8/28/2007 c7 camila
He kills Robert didn't he? God he is falling in love with her and can't do anything to avoid it. I wonder what is gonna think her when she knows what he did? if she ever gets to know. I like this chapter. She is so fragil even though she try to hide it. I guess all people have their own fear.
He kills Robert didn't he? God he is falling in love with her and can't do anything to avoid it. I wonder what is gonna think her when she knows what he did? if she ever gets to know. I like this chapter. She is so fragil even though she try to hide it. I guess all people have their own fear.
8/28/2007 c2 DreamlessInfinity
And so they meet…
~Dreamless~
And so they meet…
~Dreamless~
8/28/2007 c1 DreamlessInfinity
This sounds interesting so far… the vagueness makes it all the more compelling to read.
The only mistake I could find is this:
“You’re going back to high school.” He was informed.
It should be…
“You’re going back to high school,” he was informed.
It’s more a grammatical error than anything; the sentence doesn’t end where the quotation marks are unless it truly is a different sentence, like your last paragraph. You need a comma to replace the period. Nothing major…
~Dreamless~
This sounds interesting so far… the vagueness makes it all the more compelling to read.
The only mistake I could find is this:
“You’re going back to high school.” He was informed.
It should be…
“You’re going back to high school,” he was informed.
It’s more a grammatical error than anything; the sentence doesn’t end where the quotation marks are unless it truly is a different sentence, like your last paragraph. You need a comma to replace the period. Nothing major…
~Dreamless~
8/25/2007 c6 camila
I think that is very good.Even if he doesn't want to, he is satarting to fall for her and she on the other hand is letting him come close to her. I think that you're trying to make a story where both of the main characters are tough and don't trust so easy. I like it very much and the plot is awesome.
I think that is very good.Even if he doesn't want to, he is satarting to fall for her and she on the other hand is letting him come close to her. I think that you're trying to make a story where both of the main characters are tough and don't trust so easy. I like it very much and the plot is awesome.
8/25/2007 c6 euphorictragedy
I really like this story so far. I love this kind of plot and I can't wait to see how the events unfold. Please update soon!
I really like this story so far. I love this kind of plot and I can't wait to see how the events unfold. Please update soon!
8/25/2007 c6 Random Reader
I like this story! I'll be waiting for an update.. Hope it's soon.
XD Yet another cliché thing.. they happened to go to the mall at the same time! What a coincidence! *wink*
I like this story! I'll be waiting for an update.. Hope it's soon.
XD Yet another cliché thing.. they happened to go to the mall at the same time! What a coincidence! *wink*