8/25/2007 c4 4Midnight Artist
LOL, not really impossible, the whole fainting in arms thing.
i've fainted in the arms of a perfect stranger when i was seven and he's one of my best friends and my major mutual crush.
LOL, not really impossible, the whole fainting in arms thing.
i've fainted in the arms of a perfect stranger when i was seven and he's one of my best friends and my major mutual crush.
3/21/2007 c5 1Gracefully Clumsy
O I like this one too!
Her dad's an ass.
Haha Tyler's a cutie... in that sexy hot dangerous assasin kind of way lol
O I like this one too!
Her dad's an ass.
Haha Tyler's a cutie... in that sexy hot dangerous assasin kind of way lol
3/21/2007 c5 1UniquelyNeverSeen
well by the sounds of it, it should get pretty interesting so i'll be waiting!
well by the sounds of it, it should get pretty interesting so i'll be waiting!
3/19/2007 c5 1Gwyn Baranof
Aw, Tyler having some feelings going on?
Anyway, I am slightly out of it and have nothing to say.
Aw, Tyler having some feelings going on?
Anyway, I am slightly out of it and have nothing to say.
3/19/2007 c5 12CreepSneakPounce
nice touch including James in this point of the story...
other than the cliche' hero and basic 'did' (damsel in distress), there's also the hero's voice of reason or mentor, in the form of James.
I like the story so far, but you haven't explained what is it with her dad?
nice touch including James in this point of the story...
other than the cliche' hero and basic 'did' (damsel in distress), there's also the hero's voice of reason or mentor, in the form of James.
I like the story so far, but you haven't explained what is it with her dad?
3/18/2007 c3 15Point Zero
At the start, Sean was a lil' bit standoffish and all that (not much of a solid chapter) but in this chapter you've shown a more REAL version of him.
Meanwhile I like Chealsey and Reenie, they seam to be more complex characters.
At the start, Sean was a lil' bit standoffish and all that (not much of a solid chapter) but in this chapter you've shown a more REAL version of him.
Meanwhile I like Chealsey and Reenie, they seam to be more complex characters.
3/4/2007 c4 12Her Acoustic Heart
Oh shit is right! She's gonna hit the floor if no one catches her, (insert laugh here). I shall sit and wait for more of this awesome story to come out. Where's my chocolate...
Oh shit is right! She's gonna hit the floor if no one catches her, (insert laugh here). I shall sit and wait for more of this awesome story to come out. Where's my chocolate...
2/23/2007 c4 1Gwyn Baranof
Sorry, you do still have my interest. I think I missed the last update.
Anyway, for your information, you mixed up history and science at the beginning of this chapter. Which one is it?
You know what? This is pretty exciting. Update soon.
Sorry, you do still have my interest. I think I missed the last update.
Anyway, for your information, you mixed up history and science at the beginning of this chapter. Which one is it?
You know what? This is pretty exciting. Update soon.
2/22/2007 c4 lizzy665
HEY! whats up? loving the story! its totally awsum and i can't wait for the next chapter so update soon thanx ;) just soo yah know i like love the stories with like the assassins and like them falling in love with someone...i don't know why...i just do...so i'm sticking with this story...haha just soo you know you got another fan...tata for now :D
HEY! whats up? loving the story! its totally awsum and i can't wait for the next chapter so update soon thanx ;) just soo yah know i like love the stories with like the assassins and like them falling in love with someone...i don't know why...i just do...so i'm sticking with this story...haha just soo you know you got another fan...tata for now :D