2/22/2007 c4 1UniquelyNeverSeen
hey i liked that it's a new twist makes things fresh, compared to other romance story's, can't wait for the next chappy!
hey i liked that it's a new twist makes things fresh, compared to other romance story's, can't wait for the next chappy!
2/22/2007 c4 25tornangelwings
damn girl, i love it. i didnt know if i would, but you convinced me totally. i have a thing for hot assassins, and most of the stories i like to read have to do with abuse, i like to see a guy save her from it.. regardless if he's an assassin or not.
damn girl, i love it. i didnt know if i would, but you convinced me totally. i have a thing for hot assassins, and most of the stories i like to read have to do with abuse, i like to see a guy save her from it.. regardless if he's an assassin or not.
1/8/2007 c2 2Most.Beautiful.Whiskers
o! me like! vagueness...is Chealsey (sp?) the one that he's supposed to get close to? Because, really, it may seem like it, but we don't actually know, do we? For all we know, the spiky-haired kid might now actually be the spy-dude. It could be the freshman, for all we know! Seriously. And what if Chealsey (once again: Sp?) isn't even the girl? It could be Katherine, or even someone we haven't even been introduced to! I'm just saying. Oh, good chapter! totally loving it! You're totally on my favorites list.
o! me like! vagueness...is Chealsey (sp?) the one that he's supposed to get close to? Because, really, it may seem like it, but we don't actually know, do we? For all we know, the spiky-haired kid might now actually be the spy-dude. It could be the freshman, for all we know! Seriously. And what if Chealsey (once again: Sp?) isn't even the girl? It could be Katherine, or even someone we haven't even been introduced to! I'm just saying. Oh, good chapter! totally loving it! You're totally on my favorites list.
1/1/2007 c2 6Agent Raindrop
hey, nice start! I like the characters so far and the story seems to be going pretty well! Well, I'll be watching for un update. See ya hun!
hey, nice start! I like the characters so far and the story seems to be going pretty well! Well, I'll be watching for un update. See ya hun!
12/30/2006 c2 1Gwyn Baranof
This is definitely the kind of story I am digging right now. I just wish there was more to read at the moment. Oh, well. Update soon.
This is definitely the kind of story I am digging right now. I just wish there was more to read at the moment. Oh, well. Update soon.
12/26/2006 c1 2Most.Beautiful.Whiskers
Yep, this sounds very good. Reminds me a bit of "Agent Cody Banks" you know? When you come across it, you think it to be a bit predictable. At least, that was my first impression. I thought that i knew exactly what was going to happen. Then i thought a moment and went, "Wow. There are at least a million different things that this person could do with this story!" and so now i am hooked, and i need to know where you plan on going with this story!
Yep, this sounds very good. Reminds me a bit of "Agent Cody Banks" you know? When you come across it, you think it to be a bit predictable. At least, that was my first impression. I thought that i knew exactly what was going to happen. Then i thought a moment and went, "Wow. There are at least a million different things that this person could do with this story!" and so now i am hooked, and i need to know where you plan on going with this story!