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3/26/2007 c1 56Do-You-Love-Me
madeleine in the hospital?
3/13/2007 c1 18Tikklz
Really great. I like the mood of this peice, it reminds me of when I just sit around letting my thoughts wander around. But the poem stays on track, too. Good job doing that. I like the last line a bunch! Oh, and i really like the poem you have in your profile. It's so GREAT!
1/22/2007 c1 330in a jar pk
pretty pretty imagery. x
1/10/2007 c1 63lackluster
reading this was like an escape:

"A drunken teen, a murderer, a poet, a mailman/I’m remembering that time on the fourth of July/When you laid on this very same bed/And your feet hung off over the edge/And when you went home/that night I crawled into bed/Hugging the covers close to my face, in hopes I could catch a drift of your scent"

perhaphs i should just quote the whole thing. it's that marvelous.
1/4/2007 c1 65Aquafied
it leaves me with the question

how do you navigate a sinking ship?
12/28/2006 c1 EnigmaticArsenic
aw. it feels like a one sided best friend grown more thing- at least that's the image i foster from the last four lines.

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