
12/14/2007 c12
3Fairytale Gurl
this is amazing. please update soon
also i have one request: can u describe how nicolas looks, perferably in the story. and make his hot please:)
hahahahahaha
please update soon!

this is amazing. please update soon
also i have one request: can u describe how nicolas looks, perferably in the story. and make his hot please:)
hahahahahaha
please update soon!
10/17/2007 c6 Lila
Absolutely incredible. I'm only on chapter 6, but I can't wait to read more...actually, it's my only source of inspiration these days. Thanks for the awesome story.
Absolutely incredible. I'm only on chapter 6, but I can't wait to read more...actually, it's my only source of inspiration these days. Thanks for the awesome story.
9/2/2007 c12
13missboo13
Very well done. I don't remember how I found the story, but I'm glad I did. I can't wait for the (hopefully) upcoming action!
-Miss Boo

Very well done. I don't remember how I found the story, but I'm glad I did. I can't wait for the (hopefully) upcoming action!
-Miss Boo
6/30/2007 c11 Hazel
I am loving your story, thanks for your reply, the matches make sense now. Your plot is great it's so original, I've read a good few vampire stories, but none of them have had a vampire trying to create fake blood. I also really like the variety of your characters, I don't really have any criticisms, sorry.
I am loving your story, thanks for your reply, the matches make sense now. Your plot is great it's so original, I've read a good few vampire stories, but none of them have had a vampire trying to create fake blood. I also really like the variety of your characters, I don't really have any criticisms, sorry.
6/17/2007 c11
21insane in the brain
LMOA, that's okay, my mind is weird but THINK about it -.- seriously. I mean Em is a girl right?

LMOA, that's okay, my mind is weird but THINK about it -.- seriously. I mean Em is a girl right?
6/14/2007 c10 degrees-of-rambling
WOHOHOHO soo what's the Good Lord's connection with The Vampire eh? OH THE SUSPENSE! I WILL not rest until i read the other chapters! SCHOLS OUT AnD VAMPIRES ARE ALL AROUND! WOOHO!
WOHOHOHO soo what's the Good Lord's connection with The Vampire eh? OH THE SUSPENSE! I WILL not rest until i read the other chapters! SCHOLS OUT AnD VAMPIRES ARE ALL AROUND! WOOHO!
6/10/2007 c10
3IrishPirateQueen
No I was not expecting that little letter. I liked it. nice touch. I really liked this chapter as well. something about it was just so GOOD! ^^ cant wait for more and I totally understand the review thing.

No I was not expecting that little letter. I liked it. nice touch. I really liked this chapter as well. something about it was just so GOOD! ^^ cant wait for more and I totally understand the review thing.
6/10/2007 c10 inuyasha30022002
LOVE the story. What I really like is that you research. You know what was invented in the timeline. You add non-ficton to fiction! I love it when people make more believable!
LOVE the story. What I really like is that you research. You know what was invented in the timeline. You add non-ficton to fiction! I love it when people make more believable!
6/9/2007 c10
21insane in the brain
I suddenly had this WEIRD thought, what if she got her period? o.0
I'm weird I KNOW, but wouldn't that be blood as well? Could he collect THAT? o.0
Sit over a bucket maybe... for a week xD

I suddenly had this WEIRD thought, what if she got her period? o.0
I'm weird I KNOW, but wouldn't that be blood as well? Could he collect THAT? o.0
Sit over a bucket maybe... for a week xD
5/8/2007 c9
3Kadekksys
great chapter! i dont mind romance... I'm all for a well- written one. its just that so many stories now are so cliched you really have to hunt to find one in pure form. yours is exactly that. Fantastic story! and i love the new plot twist with the whole blood thing. yes, yes. i cant wait for more!

great chapter! i dont mind romance... I'm all for a well- written one. its just that so many stories now are so cliched you really have to hunt to find one in pure form. yours is exactly that. Fantastic story! and i love the new plot twist with the whole blood thing. yes, yes. i cant wait for more!
5/7/2007 c9 inksketcher
GREAT CHAPTER! and breeches are pants...? wow im dense! CAnt wait 4 the next ONe. UPDATE ASAP!
-Inksketcher
GREAT CHAPTER! and breeches are pants...? wow im dense! CAnt wait 4 the next ONe. UPDATE ASAP!
-Inksketcher
5/7/2007 c9
3IrishPirateQueen
*reads author replies to reviews* YAY ROMANCE! That will be dramatic for sure. sorry I didnt read any of this sooner. Im waiting to take an exam as I read this, and today is the last day of school so yah Ive been busy. Great chapter. I love this ^^

*reads author replies to reviews* YAY ROMANCE! That will be dramatic for sure. sorry I didnt read any of this sooner. Im waiting to take an exam as I read this, and today is the last day of school so yah Ive been busy. Great chapter. I love this ^^