for Beautiful Delusion12/29/2006 c1 
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I think the one line "You think you know it all" threw me off a little, because it didn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem, but maybe I'm missing something in it. I especially liked the ending though. Great job =)
18first-casualty-of-warI think the one line "You think you know it all" threw me off a little, because it didn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem, but maybe I'm missing something in it. I especially liked the ending though. Great job =)