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for the story with no beginnings and endings

11/16/2007 c1 5acousticXsunrise
i cut too.

i like to describe it as,

"it's nothing,

but it's everything."

sort of like your idea of no beginning

or end.

you're a good writer

keep at it
3/14/2007 c1 nemivicious
I really, really, liked this. Especially the ending because it was...well, it was great.
1/4/2007 c1 3Simfreak111
i LOVE this one shot. it is so well... deep. keep writing and keep up the good work!
12/30/2006 c1 jct7
Interesting concept...I think this would make a really great poem.

Perhaps you should consider removing the non-italicized portions of

the piece as it seems to hamper the tone and flow of the overall work.

-jct7

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