for Apartment 5E12/29/2007 c1 
28Erisah Mae
This was a simple, yet evocative work- the rich descriptions allowed for a good sense of both the two distinct characters' relationship and their environment. I have to say, I found myself wondering about the questions raised in this piece about them.
To be honest though, I think I prefer this as a oneshot- that way it is enigmatic, but still powerful in its portrayal of the human need for contact.
Beautiful work.
Erisah
28Erisah MaeThis was a simple, yet evocative work- the rich descriptions allowed for a good sense of both the two distinct characters' relationship and their environment. I have to say, I found myself wondering about the questions raised in this piece about them.
To be honest though, I think I prefer this as a oneshot- that way it is enigmatic, but still powerful in its portrayal of the human need for contact.
Beautiful work.
Erisah
5/23/2007 c1 pink skyy
I dont know why no ones given you any reviews but girl it was god. I just foung you fic now, 6 mnoths later, I wish I had found it sooner so I could tell you to update, but I doubt you'll update for one little tiny review but it okay. Just wanted to tell ya that it was da bomb and I'd like to read more
I dont know why no ones given you any reviews but girl it was god. I just foung you fic now, 6 mnoths later, I wish I had found it sooner so I could tell you to update, but I doubt you'll update for one little tiny review but it okay. Just wanted to tell ya that it was da bomb and I'd like to read more