for Would You Love Me Then?4/4/2012 c1 
58Nancy Mae
Loved this poem. There were a couple minor spelling errors, but nothing too terrible. Other than that it was really good.
~KML92
58Nancy MaeLoved this poem. There were a couple minor spelling errors, but nothing too terrible. Other than that it was really good.
~KML92
3/19/2008 c1 20Twilight Starr
Sometimes they just won't love you no matter what. Nice work.
Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
20Twilight StarrSometimes they just won't love you no matter what. Nice work.
Good luck with poetry and life. Have an excellent day.
~Twilight Starr~
1/24/2007 c1 97rust phoenix
There's a lot of emotion in this poem, I like it. There were a few minor grammar mistakes, but still a good read.
97rust phoenixThere's a lot of emotion in this poem, I like it. There were a few minor grammar mistakes, but still a good read.
12/30/2006 c1 72MokikaStyle
Use tears istead of tares and I'd instead of Id. For the most part it was a bit clique but well written. Have a blessed day, keep on writing, good job (BTW)! Would you review some of my stuff? (:
72MokikaStyleUse tears istead of tares and I'd instead of Id. For the most part it was a bit clique but well written. Have a blessed day, keep on writing, good job (BTW)! Would you review some of my stuff? (: