for buried12/31/2010 c1 
7erase.me.away
OH,
that was pretty deep. :)
god job on the poem/story :)
continue to write! :)
7erase.me.awayOH,
that was pretty deep. :)
god job on the poem/story :)
continue to write! :)
2/1/2010 c1 34Black Sparrow
I loved it! You're an amazing author ;D
I'll have to read more from you soon.
34Black SparrowI loved it! You're an amazing author ;D
I'll have to read more from you soon.
8/13/2008 c1 1A Vestige of Peace
Oh! This one was so good, too! "I buried my heart so none could steal
the memory of my love’s laughter." That was beautiful.
1A Vestige of PeaceOh! This one was so good, too! "I buried my heart so none could steal
the memory of my love’s laughter." That was beautiful.
5/23/2008 c1 4melkor116
i really love the flow of this. to me it has the rhythm of a nursery rhyme in a twisted bittersweet way. very singsong and sway like. the rhyming ending words give a nice effect!
4melkor116i really love the flow of this. to me it has the rhythm of a nursery rhyme in a twisted bittersweet way. very singsong and sway like. the rhyming ending words give a nice effect!
2/5/2007 c1 missleveratto
That's a beautiful poem.
I could even be bold enough to say that it reminds me of "Annabelle Lee" by Edgar A. Poe. :D
That's a beautiful poem.
I could even be bold enough to say that it reminds me of "Annabelle Lee" by Edgar A. Poe. :D