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1/29/2007 c1 112PerpetualBliss44
I get the general feeling of this poem, but it sort of...lacks passion.

You did a good job of displaying and explaining the lonliness, but not to the extent of which you feel it. If you could expand a little on exactly what you're feeling, I think it would give the piece much more drive.

Keep writing, though. It wasn't bad at all, not by a long shot.

Nice job.

Kerstyn
1/1/2007 c1 31Leaving Here
wow.

wow.

you remind me of a character. peyton off of One tree hill...

keep writng.

powerful.
1/1/2007 c1 14xhaiiro
I think this is pretty, but a little short. Happy new year ^_^

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