10/2/2012 c3 1Springerlight
*sniffles* Horrible, horrible cliffhanger. Only now do I remember why I warned myself not to read incomplete stuff, you get too attached...

Uhm, anyway, I adore Senti and Matriv, the kiss thing is so cute. A real bit of innocence amoungst all the death and sadness.

3/10/2010 c2 Alpharoyale
Mah-nay! (sorry, a quirk of mine, whenever I'm lost for words thats the only thing that comes to mind)

Ok, recalled the power of speech, and WOW, fell in love from the first sentence! I love your writing style it just you into the story and doesn't let you go! And I love how you don't reveal everything about the character in the first two sentences like many authors tend to do, but just build it up or form it like statue little by little revealing the character, amazing!

LOVE IT, and can't wait to read MORE!

11/30/2009 c3 2FemoralGlyph
Meow meow meow…Oh, hallo thar!:3

I’ve been meaning to read this lovely story for some time now, but I’ve not had a lot of time on my hands and I must say, regretfully, I felt a little intimidated by the stories sheer length! –cries- I’m sorry for being so late!D’:

Anyway, on with the review!:3

Okay, I have to say this lovely story that you’ve made reminds me of Kate Constable’s series about singers- ‘The Chanters of Tremaris Trilogy’! I love all three of the books and if you haven’t read them, I highly recommend them!;D But, to the point, The Last Singer only reminds me of Mrs. Constable’s series because of power through song and discrimination against those who have the voice. Also the main character is known as the ‘Singer of all Songs’…That is also the title of the first book in the series! –squeals-

Awweh! –switches subjects- Though a little cliché, I really do love those occasional charries that don’t know anything about the real word, y’know? They’re always just so darn cute! –squeezes Senti plush- Oh hohoho! –giggle- And the ‘what is love’ thing? GENIOUS! –smells the yaoi in the air-

-ponders a little more- Come to think of it, in the second book (I think it was) there’s a character that speaks in his mind as well!:3 Huzzah for coincidence!xD; Okay, I promise to stop talking about the Chanters now!X3

By the way, props on the blood and gore bits, they were quite tasteful and, well, I have this sadistic need to see my favorite characters in pain and right at the end there, you NAILED IT! –does a little dance- This story is SO going on my favorite listy!-flails- I like how you write, it’s pretty straight forward and shows the reader what’s what!;D

All in all, I’m waiting for some panda-love with Mat-kun and Senti! Those boys!X3 Ack! All that’s left is for the villan to take Mat-kun away and have him tortured or somethin’! That would just make my heart EXPLODE! –hyperventilates-

-sigh- Keep up the good work! I beliievee in You! –waves victory flag- The power of one and all that!;D

-smooch-

-Alshmee

6/9/2009 c3 Dying
update, please? ;D you know you want to! i love this story!

3/20/2009 c3 8Souls-and-Turkey-Cafe
holy crap, you updated.

and hey, cheese is awesome. it wouldn't be cheese if it didn't work

3/15/2008 c2 Sightless
So I read your story, and decided I really really liked it. I'm confused as to why you only have eight reviews so far. I'm going to recommend it to a friend of mine, she'll probably like it also. I haven't got any stories posted, if you happen to check just in case you were wondering what kind of person was reviewing your story, mostly because I'm a beta (also because I'm really self-concious about my stories) for this friend of mine who I'm going to recommend this for. I believe your piece has a very nice storyline so far, even though its pretty short. The antagonist seems quite evil. Chapter 2 makes me think you've got quite a lot planned out, as you mentioned at the beginning. I just looked at the updated date; its been over a year! I think you should really come back to this. Is it possible? If you want some help or anything I'd be glad to offer my services, though they aren't much. I read Skin Deep also, though I didn't review it (sorry, I was a little busy at the time) I'll probably get around to it some time. I hope this encourages you to write... blah I'm not giving you any critcism. I'm quite sorry about that. So, back to criticism. I love how you have so many details about things, it makes the story very full, sort of like soup or chowder. Your details are the ingrediants that add to the flavor and without them, it would be a rather strained and watery soup. But you don't have a lot of soup to put the ingrediants into yet! You need to put more liquid into this bowl that you've made, get my drift? I've put this story on alert and I promise to review it again as soon as you update. Senti seems like such a nice character. I get the feeling that a lot of bad things are going to happen to him, similar to your story Skin Deep. A good person that gets put into a wonderful yet terrible situation and has a lot of bad things occur. Its so sad, but it sings to the soul. Haha, sings? Singer? Amazingly well-done. I await your next installment.

3/11/2007 c1 TwilightTreader
Yeito-chan, I always love the attention you give to detail. It makes a world so much more believable and one can actually see it in your mind.

The Last Singer is no acception. From merely reading chapter one, you identify with Senti and see through his eyes. The way the children talk and act around him reminds me of how if society would only give an open mind about what they don't understand and not be so judgemental, they could actually start to see this seemingly heartless killer for who he really is. Anyone who get's to know the truth behind why he's forced to do those horrifying things seems to get killed though. Bummer.

But you see that not everything about Senti is about destruction. He tries to immagine what life outside of the battlefield and blood streaked skies is like. He also is kind to people whenever he can be, even if they don't understand or appreciate it. It seems the only person that stands in his way is Tormen. If only he was targeted for assassination instead of Senti...but I guess that would make it too easy. ^_^

And so with that, on to chapter 2! XD