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1/10/2007 c1 His Mercy's Waiting
This poem made me smile. I love the sense of urgency around the middle, followed by a sudden lack of emotion in the end. Great job, keep it up!
1/7/2007 c1 5Lil Firecracker
"The face of the clock/reads unimportant." For an unexplainable reason, I adore that line. "Its waking wails" /do/ "incite me" - this poem is so beautifully descriptive that it's like I'm there. From now on I shall call you the Poetry Queen, just so you know.

Love,

Selene Amaya
1/2/2007 c1 145BellonaFlayreRiver
intense. i really like this. the word choice with the tangly carpet is a good imagery. lovely.

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