for bodysong9/29/2007 c1 
58White Tea and Ginger
"i hear you choking on her notes/the supple sound of her tongue on torso"
"the staccato moan finale, finish"
"your silence is deafening"
stunners.
58White Tea and Ginger"i hear you choking on her notes/the supple sound of her tongue on torso"
"the staccato moan finale, finish"
"your silence is deafening"
stunners.
1/15/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Well, there is certainly some disgusting imagery in this poem. Wow. I do like the way this is constructed, and the idea is very original. The 3rd stanza is probably my favorite, because of the giving the song a color, a density. That's nice. Interesting poem. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesWell, there is certainly some disgusting imagery in this poem. Wow. I do like the way this is constructed, and the idea is very original. The 3rd stanza is probably my favorite, because of the giving the song a color, a density. That's nice. Interesting poem. Keep writing! :)