for Everdearest7/8/2007 c1 
15Malverde
This is beautiful, the italics a little distracting thought, keep the good job :)
15MalverdeThis is beautiful, the italics a little distracting thought, keep the good job :)
6/27/2007 c1 13Elegant Raven
Am I allowed to say the name? lol. Lovely. It was so sweet, and you saying my poetry is great... Wow and I just read yours and was swept away by the current! You are the first I can give absolutely no critisism to and I bow before you! Very nice on putting those bolds and italics. You wanted the world to know in an almost subtle way! You could make any woman's heart melt!
13Elegant RavenAm I allowed to say the name? lol. Lovely. It was so sweet, and you saying my poetry is great... Wow and I just read yours and was swept away by the current! You are the first I can give absolutely no critisism to and I bow before you! Very nice on putting those bolds and italics. You wanted the world to know in an almost subtle way! You could make any woman's heart melt!
3/10/2007 c1 15Point Zero
Sweet poem, totally awesome dude.
I was just browsing through my profile and I found the reviews for "The Unhealing". I saw your review (which helped alot by the way) and decided to visit YOUR profile again. This poem was amazing and you are an excellent writer.
I hope to read more of your work,
Titus.
15Point ZeroSweet poem, totally awesome dude.
I was just browsing through my profile and I found the reviews for "The Unhealing". I saw your review (which helped alot by the way) and decided to visit YOUR profile again. This poem was amazing and you are an excellent writer.
I hope to read more of your work,
Titus.
2/14/2007 c1 1irishangel110290
I LOVE YOUR POEM AND I HAVEN'T GOTTEN A CHANCE TO GET MY STORY UP BUT I HOPE YOU LIKE IT WHEN I DO AND THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ.
IRISHANGEL110290
P.S. GLAD YOUR NOT SINGLE B/C VALENTINE'S DAY IS NOT A TIME FOR LONLINESS.
1irishangel110290I LOVE YOUR POEM AND I HAVEN'T GOTTEN A CHANCE TO GET MY STORY UP BUT I HOPE YOU LIKE IT WHEN I DO AND THIS IS THE BEST POEM I HAVE EVER READ.
IRISHANGEL110290
P.S. GLAD YOUR NOT SINGLE B/C VALENTINE'S DAY IS NOT A TIME FOR LONLINESS.
1/3/2007 c1 29FrostedTeardrop
This was a well written poem. Interesting format you had going. The second stanza was my favorite. Good job.
29FrostedTeardropThis was a well written poem. Interesting format you had going. The second stanza was my favorite. Good job.
1/3/2007 c1 95Ellin Louise
Unless I am missing some sort of pattern or hidden message, I do not see the purpose of the bold, italic and underlined formating. The poem is well written and I feel this just detracts from the words, but perhaps I have not worked out some sort of code...
95Ellin LouiseUnless I am missing some sort of pattern or hidden message, I do not see the purpose of the bold, italic and underlined formating. The poem is well written and I feel this just detracts from the words, but perhaps I have not worked out some sort of code...
1/3/2007 c1 330in a jar pk
i sensed a lot of pain in this...like, pain over THAT ONE PERSON who can make you feels amazing one second and like shit the next. brill work, keep it up. x
330in a jar pki sensed a lot of pain in this...like, pain over THAT ONE PERSON who can make you feels amazing one second and like shit the next. brill work, keep it up. x