
4/26/2007 c1
19Phoenix-ofthe-Goldenrose
Wow, this is really powerful. Choices are a big part of everyone's life...yeah...really liked this!

Wow, this is really powerful. Choices are a big part of everyone's life...yeah...really liked this!
1/3/2007 c1
59Frore
Hmm... For future reference, never put "R&R" in the summary, or "read and review," because the summary should be able to drag them to the poem without remonstration.
For "having it all," this poem was certainly devoid of imagery and description. I am sure I would be less critical had your synopsis not been self promotional. Keep writing, and please bear what I said in mind.

Hmm... For future reference, never put "R&R" in the summary, or "read and review," because the summary should be able to drag them to the poem without remonstration.
For "having it all," this poem was certainly devoid of imagery and description. I am sure I would be less critical had your synopsis not been self promotional. Keep writing, and please bear what I said in mind.