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1/22/2007 c1 61mothersuperiorjumpedthegun
I really liked the message of this ... well, if you intended it as the message ... of wanting someone to do things just because, even though you can do them yourself. But when 'child needed someone to love them', you can't do that yourself, you need someone else to be there ... I don't know. I really liked it though.
1/4/2007 c1 8Amerie Marque
Awh. That was cute, in a sad emo sort of way.

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1/3/2007 c1 34Smoky Bear
i think you can make more of this than you have here. it's brevity is good and i liked the way you've used bare facts and accompanying itallic thoughts to envoke empathy for the characters... but it doesn't always pack enough punch - it does, however, have potential as the message is poignant. keep writing x

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