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1/7/2007 c1 9Sakura Taking
I really like how this is different from what is normally written about all the time. Very thought provoking...and if this could be done, it would make a great experience, both learning and understanding.

Well written with a good flow. The ending quite well done.

Fantastic work!
1/7/2007 c1 16brokendreams21
Yay! You posted!

I find these kind of pieces refreshing (probably because I've reading reading a CERTAIN type of poetry for too long.) This poem provokes an interesting thought. What if we were someone else for one day? The possibilities could almost be infinite. But of course, there is always the part where we all learn about others. We learn to understand...and other fun things.

I really liked the similes used in this poem. The ending is quite final and I liked it.

Great job!


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