for A Shade of Pure6/27/2007 c1 
24thecolourgrey
lovely piece...intriguing question at the end of it too. Very thought-provoking. Great job!
24thecolourgreylovely piece...intriguing question at the end of it too. Very thought-provoking. Great job!
3/15/2007 c1 Orual
I think I know what you mean by pretending to be white. Purity (of any sort) is a difficult topic because there aren't many examples you can point to. The use of colors to illustrate your purpose was very effective. Not at all bad for one who claims not to be a poet. :)
I think I know what you mean by pretending to be white. Purity (of any sort) is a difficult topic because there aren't many examples you can point to. The use of colors to illustrate your purpose was very effective. Not at all bad for one who claims not to be a poet. :)
3/5/2007 c1 13Mr.Satire
A stunning analogy between the elusiveness of purity and a melting Winter's snow! It seems as though you are alluding to the Sun as sin... What an original choice of imagery!
13Mr.SatireA stunning analogy between the elusiveness of purity and a melting Winter's snow! It seems as though you are alluding to the Sun as sin... What an original choice of imagery!
1/8/2007 c1 104Chromium Dragon
That was absolutely beautiful, amazing, thought-inspiring, the list goes on and on. I don't know what else to say about it.
I'd also like to thank you for reviewing "That Apathetic Elf", and to tell you, just in case you're interested, that the first chapter is now up.
Wonderful poem, and thanks again for reviewing my story.
~The Wingless Raven
104Chromium DragonThat was absolutely beautiful, amazing, thought-inspiring, the list goes on and on. I don't know what else to say about it.
I'd also like to thank you for reviewing "That Apathetic Elf", and to tell you, just in case you're interested, that the first chapter is now up.
Wonderful poem, and thanks again for reviewing my story.
~The Wingless Raven