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2/22/2007 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Hmm, this is nice. I like the imagery in the second stanza - the verbs you used to describe everything were strong. The last stanza is especially telling of your character after meeting this person. Very nice. Keep writing! :)
1/4/2007 c1 84tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis
Awesome. Very metaphoric.

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