for Vacuum2/22/2007 c1 
871no.peace.los.angeles
Hmm, this is nice. I like the imagery in the second stanza - the verbs you used to describe everything were strong. The last stanza is especially telling of your character after meeting this person. Very nice. Keep writing! :)
871no.peace.los.angelesHmm, this is nice. I like the imagery in the second stanza - the verbs you used to describe everything were strong. The last stanza is especially telling of your character after meeting this person. Very nice. Keep writing! :)