for Disney Gave Me Unrealistic Expectations About Love8/4/2008 c1 
8audsome
I am a disappointed that her only fault so far is size B breasts. I can't read any further than that.
8audsomeI am a disappointed that her only fault so far is size B breasts. I can't read any further than that.
8/4/2008 c13 1sweets555
this story is a scary realization for me and my new bf.
we're not so good at the touching/kissing thing, and i'm not sure if he knows my mom died.
i think im going to go have a panic attack...
1sweets555this story is a scary realization for me and my new bf.
we're not so good at the touching/kissing thing, and i'm not sure if he knows my mom died.
i think im going to go have a panic attack...
8/4/2008 c31 smartalleck
the last few chapters made me frolick about in angst and joy and possibly startle those in my near vicinity, which is always a good time. so freakin' awesome, is basically the moral of this story, that and i was so enraptured that i could not read any of the AP i have to do. dang it Homer and your Odyssey and your lack of Disney...
the last few chapters made me frolick about in angst and joy and possibly startle those in my near vicinity, which is always a good time. so freakin' awesome, is basically the moral of this story, that and i was so enraptured that i could not read any of the AP i have to do. dang it Homer and your Odyssey and your lack of Disney...
8/4/2008 c7 sweets555
definitely believable, definitely up to standards, and sevin is definitely still cute.
and i'd like to 'amen' that kids our age have separate calendars.
definitely believable, definitely up to standards, and sevin is definitely still cute.
and i'd like to 'amen' that kids our age have separate calendars.
8/4/2008 c3 sweets555
daphne sounds like me. except she was 12, and i was 13.
otherwise put, well done.
daphne sounds like me. except she was 12, and i was 13.
otherwise put, well done.
8/4/2008 c1 Rhod
Funny how you mention that Mulan isn't really a princess, me and my friends almost had a fight over this x)
Funny how you mention that Mulan isn't really a princess, me and my friends almost had a fight over this x)
8/4/2008 c31 foreverxlove
This story was amazing!
I had no problem with the length of it, I love long stories so the length just added to how great this story was.
The ending was great and at times I was so into the story that when there was a miscommunication between Daphne and Sevin, I was shouting at them in my head like "WHAT? NO! THAT'S NOT WHAT HE MEANS!" haha so you really know how to get your readers into the story.
I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to reading something else from you! (hopefully something along the lines of a sequel? :] )
This story was amazing!
I had no problem with the length of it, I love long stories so the length just added to how great this story was.
The ending was great and at times I was so into the story that when there was a miscommunication between Daphne and Sevin, I was shouting at them in my head like "WHAT? NO! THAT'S NOT WHAT HE MEANS!" haha so you really know how to get your readers into the story.
I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to reading something else from you! (hopefully something along the lines of a sequel? :] )
8/3/2008 c31 2mia5081
So intense. Seriously, I loved both this this chapter and the story. I mean, I'm so happy that Sevin and Daphne got together that it's almost like they're my characters, which is a good thing because that means you got the reader to really feel for them. And Greece-my homeland (well, half anyways). I can't wait to go back (it's been five years). Back to the real review lol. Your writing is really easy to read, the narration flows and the plot was really well-thought out, even if it did take them thirty chapters to get together. So, ending on that note:
Great job! (And I hope to read something else by you soon :D )
~Mia
2mia5081So intense. Seriously, I loved both this this chapter and the story. I mean, I'm so happy that Sevin and Daphne got together that it's almost like they're my characters, which is a good thing because that means you got the reader to really feel for them. And Greece-my homeland (well, half anyways). I can't wait to go back (it's been five years). Back to the real review lol. Your writing is really easy to read, the narration flows and the plot was really well-thought out, even if it did take them thirty chapters to get together. So, ending on that note:
Great job! (And I hope to read something else by you soon :D )
~Mia
8/3/2008 c31 shadowbaby4ever
LOVED IT!
thats all i have to say!
great job, i do hope you continue to write stories!
LOVED IT!
thats all i have to say!
great job, i do hope you continue to write stories!
8/3/2008 c2 1Lehxra
Whoa...I was like 'Girl, what are you doing? Wait no don't do that!Wait yeah do that! Wait, what?' Yes yes drama. I do want some drama. I sound laammee!
1LehxraWhoa...I was like 'Girl, what are you doing? Wait no don't do that!Wait yeah do that! Wait, what?' Yes yes drama. I do want some drama. I sound laammee!
8/2/2008 c31 x.dynamite
OH MAN.
the much anticipated last and final chapter :O! ! !
Waited FOREVER FOR THIS :).
aw, it's so sweet, though I do hope there's an . . . epilogue?
:D!
would be totally awesome ;).
but that's a great way to end this off, anyway :D!
OH MAN.
the much anticipated last and final chapter :O! ! !
Waited FOREVER FOR THIS :).
aw, it's so sweet, though I do hope there's an . . . epilogue?
:D!
would be totally awesome ;).
but that's a great way to end this off, anyway :D!
8/2/2008 c31 K.P. Crest
wow, the end already...wah! but seriously, that was great. i hope they can make it work for as long as possible. they're cute together. but congratulations on finishing it and making it great (and adding in that whole disney princess thing. i liked that a lot)!
wow, the end already...wah! but seriously, that was great. i hope they can make it work for as long as possible. they're cute together. but congratulations on finishing it and making it great (and adding in that whole disney princess thing. i liked that a lot)!