
5/9/2008 c27
19Hydie
I was going to have to hire an assassin if this really WAS the last chapter. Anyway, glad to see that she's actually getting somewhere with her feelings. :)

I was going to have to hire an assassin if this really WAS the last chapter. Anyway, glad to see that she's actually getting somewhere with her feelings. :)
5/3/2008 c1
1no more airplanes
I would like to say that I am in love with this story. I had stopped reading fictionpress for a few years, and I started again recently, with this story. I am in love with Daphne and Sevin! You definitely have a way with hooking the audience with an addictive and interesting plot. I have been feeling guilty for not reviewing since I started reading, so I just wanted to let you know that I love your work!

I would like to say that I am in love with this story. I had stopped reading fictionpress for a few years, and I started again recently, with this story. I am in love with Daphne and Sevin! You definitely have a way with hooking the audience with an addictive and interesting plot. I have been feeling guilty for not reviewing since I started reading, so I just wanted to let you know that I love your work!
5/2/2008 c26 miss
Ok...Now, dont get me wrong, I do love Daphne to pieces, but I cant even describe how I am that someone FINALLY called Daphne an IDIOT.
Please dont take offense but I have been calling Daphne an idiot since 10 chapters ago, because she was being a coward.
Im hoping you meant to write the story so that Daphne would seem like a coward, that cant seem to get it right, I would feel bad if you didnt. (LoL)
I know I should read chapter 27 but I couldnt wait! You are doing an AMAZING job and you deserve every amount of praise you get. *I Love it*
Ok...Now, dont get me wrong, I do love Daphne to pieces, but I cant even describe how I am that someone FINALLY called Daphne an IDIOT.
Please dont take offense but I have been calling Daphne an idiot since 10 chapters ago, because she was being a coward.
Im hoping you meant to write the story so that Daphne would seem like a coward, that cant seem to get it right, I would feel bad if you didnt. (LoL)
I know I should read chapter 27 but I couldnt wait! You are doing an AMAZING job and you deserve every amount of praise you get. *I Love it*
4/30/2008 c27
4locks92
End Notes: Poor Daphne...as you might have guessed, this is the last chapter...
PLEASE DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN! I almost had a seizure! But anyway...I'm glad it isn't over yet.
aw...I feel really bad for Daphne and a bit annoyed at Sevin...lol. In my opinion it's both their faults they're not together..lol. So ayah, thank you for the update. I've been waiting..lol. So a great end to a great night. I've been staying home sick for the past few days, your update lifted my spirits a little. Thanks for that. Best of luck for later chappies and god bless.
~Maryann~

End Notes: Poor Daphne...as you might have guessed, this is the last chapter...
PLEASE DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN! I almost had a seizure! But anyway...I'm glad it isn't over yet.
aw...I feel really bad for Daphne and a bit annoyed at Sevin...lol. In my opinion it's both their faults they're not together..lol. So ayah, thank you for the update. I've been waiting..lol. So a great end to a great night. I've been staying home sick for the past few days, your update lifted my spirits a little. Thanks for that. Best of luck for later chappies and god bless.
~Maryann~
4/29/2008 c27 Jay827
:'( awe.
grr. she needs to grow a back bone. tell him! jesus. it doesn't matter if it's too late. who cares? even if he is with someone else. if he like(s)(d) her he should know.
thanks for the update.
:'( awe.
grr. she needs to grow a back bone. tell him! jesus. it doesn't matter if it's too late. who cares? even if he is with someone else. if he like(s)(d) her he should know.
thanks for the update.
4/29/2008 c27 Kelsci
I just spent the last two days reading this (when I probably should've been catching up on schoolwork, cuz I'm sick). God, this story is like chocolate! No, it's even more addictive than chocolate!
DAPHNE JUST GO OUT THERE AND TACKLE SEVIN DOWN. Jump him or something. Daphne annoys me so much, but she's awesome. This story is freakin' awesome.
And YAY! Jia and Martin are together! I mean, I was really starting to hate Jia, but now she's cool.
It's just...poor Flo. She's the only one without a possible pairing.
Oh, and I think the ending shouldn't be a Disney happy ending, though it could still be happy. If it were a Disney happy ending, it would totally go against the whole, like, theme of the story.
I know you're really busy, but please, please, please update soon. Yeah, I'm so selfish x]
-Kelsci
I just spent the last two days reading this (when I probably should've been catching up on schoolwork, cuz I'm sick). God, this story is like chocolate! No, it's even more addictive than chocolate!
DAPHNE JUST GO OUT THERE AND TACKLE SEVIN DOWN. Jump him or something. Daphne annoys me so much, but she's awesome. This story is freakin' awesome.
And YAY! Jia and Martin are together! I mean, I was really starting to hate Jia, but now she's cool.
It's just...poor Flo. She's the only one without a possible pairing.
Oh, and I think the ending shouldn't be a Disney happy ending, though it could still be happy. If it were a Disney happy ending, it would totally go against the whole, like, theme of the story.
I know you're really busy, but please, please, please update soon. Yeah, I'm so selfish x]
-Kelsci
4/29/2008 c27
2Inkless
i know it's really sad and everything, but i almost feel as if Jia's was right: Daphne can be just a self-pitying mess sometimes. she cries too much, lol, but i guess that's just part of her. can't wait to see how this ends. i better get some butterflies = ]

i know it's really sad and everything, but i almost feel as if Jia's was right: Daphne can be just a self-pitying mess sometimes. she cries too much, lol, but i guess that's just part of her. can't wait to see how this ends. i better get some butterflies = ]
4/29/2008 c27 starsfinallyxplode
Agh the title for this chapter was so misleading. I was so sure that she was going to tell Sevin everything, and that they were going to "kiss and make up," but instead that title referred to Martin and Jia.
Oh well, as long as Daphne gets over her fears and makes a big gesture for Sevin soon, I won't be too upset.
Agh the title for this chapter was so misleading. I was so sure that she was going to tell Sevin everything, and that they were going to "kiss and make up," but instead that title referred to Martin and Jia.
Oh well, as long as Daphne gets over her fears and makes a big gesture for Sevin soon, I won't be too upset.
4/29/2008 c27
2Miraculous.Science
that freaked me out when you said this was the last chapter. update soon!

that freaked me out when you said this was the last chapter. update soon!
4/29/2008 c27
8lunacy and literacy
Ahh, the trio is back together! Yaay!
I'm sad to see this story ending soon, but I'm obviously excited to see it resolved. Soo, basically I can't wait for the next chapter, and I love all the characters. They're just... real. They're not perfect, but they're pretty distinct, and I think that's what makes them so relate-able. Anyway. I love this story.

Ahh, the trio is back together! Yaay!
I'm sad to see this story ending soon, but I'm obviously excited to see it resolved. Soo, basically I can't wait for the next chapter, and I love all the characters. They're just... real. They're not perfect, but they're pretty distinct, and I think that's what makes them so relate-able. Anyway. I love this story.
4/29/2008 c27 kimlen
First thing, GREAT story! I tend to not review stories but I'm trying. The chapter name had my hopes up thinking 'FINALLY Daphne and Sevin get together' but Jia and Martin is good too. I just wanna hit Daphne over the head though. he he.
First thing, GREAT story! I tend to not review stories but I'm trying. The chapter name had my hopes up thinking 'FINALLY Daphne and Sevin get together' but Jia and Martin is good too. I just wanna hit Daphne over the head though. he he.
4/29/2008 c27 Espionage In My Shoe
Oh my good golly gosh! I SO thought when I read the title 'Kissing and Making Up' that it was referring to Daphne and Sevin. Conflabbit!
Oh my good golly gosh! I SO thought when I read the title 'Kissing and Making Up' that it was referring to Daphne and Sevin. Conflabbit!
4/29/2008 c27
2midnightbeauty
OH my GOD so unfair! This chapter made me come THIS close to crying **pout** anywho, I'm not writing a long review cause FP keeps cutting them off but UPDATE! You can't leave me like thiss!
Kisses,
midnightbeauty

OH my GOD so unfair! This chapter made me come THIS close to crying **pout** anywho, I'm not writing a long review cause FP keeps cutting them off but UPDATE! You can't leave me like thiss!
Kisses,
midnightbeauty