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4/29/2008 c27 2mia5081
Oh man, this chapter was wicked intense. Maybe even more intense then the last one. On one hand, I'm so happy for Jia and Martin for getting together (and also for Jia and Daphne putting aside their differences), but at the same time, I feel bad for Daphne and Sevin, because, well it's obvious I think lol. Anyways, I'll stop rambling now. Great chapter!

Update soon!

~Mia
4/29/2008 c27 9xemeraldeyesx
DONT SCARE ME LIKE THAT! *hyperventilates* if that was the last chapter i'd have to kill you then bring you back from the dead to write more.

Laylee should die too :)

in the nicest possible way though. why cant you make her a bitch?
4/29/2008 c27 8laternflickeredinmymind
way to fool me with your title. I thought you were talking about Sevin and Daphne not Jia and Martin and not Jia, Flo, and Daphne. But I guess it all worked out.

It was a good chapter. I just feel really bad for Daphne with the whole Sevin thing. That sucks.

For some reason, Sevin is still my hero. I love him.

good luck with your tests and update when you can.:)

-xxstarryeyedxx
4/29/2008 c27 Inanna Skili
Great chapter! Seriously, though, this is getting painful to read, and I find myself yelling at Daphne to *just say something*... she's a really realistic character, and I guess her inability to talk to Sevin reminds me of myself... so it's good painful. Anyway, keep writing :)
4/27/2008 c26 2Inkless
daphne is such a utilitarian. it's great; maybe her and Sevin can FINALLY get together now .. will the story be over then? NO!
4/26/2008 c26 a beginner
glad ur here...
4/25/2008 c26 Kasablanca
Yes! Flo is the greatest! She totally forgave Daphne AND approved of her and Sevin. What a wonderful, sweet person :)

Hehe. She wants Sevin back? Well, good, except that there's no way he'll come back to her just like that. Certainly not at this first attempt! Daphne, who are you kidding? Silly girl.

Zander; don't get me wrong, he's a totally emotionless man-whore, and I hate him... but... I love to hate him! He's funny! XD And in his photo he looks so good! In an ideal world, Flo would tame him and they'd get together! Hehehe!

You don't have to reply or anything (not that you can, hehe). Writing reviews amuses me, and knowing you'll read them... also amuses me. Just keep on writing! Full speed ahead! :D
4/24/2008 c26 xoxo4aang
oh i can't wait to see how she apologizes to Sevin. I'm so glad i started to read this story because theres one with a similar and name ... and sane people should stay away from it. but they should definitley flock to this one :]
4/24/2008 c26 9xemeraldeyesx
*gasps*

ok im halfway between shocked and elated. she got back together with flo AND told flo about her and sevin all in the same chapter!
4/23/2008 c26 19Hydie
Yay! I like! That's so much fun!
4/23/2008 c26 Blank89901
Aw...she's gonna beg him to take her back? That's so cute! Update soon.
4/21/2008 c25 24Inanna Skili
Greatest ending to a chapter EVER! I love how she totally bawls him out, even after she's dumped her drink on him. It made me so happy!
4/21/2008 c26 8lunacy and literacy
YAAY! Yes finally! Flo loves Daphne again and now Daphne is going to talk to Sevin! woo. can't wait for the next chapter! =]
4/21/2008 c26 Espionage In My Shoe
Ahahahaha! Yes! This was beautiful. I really need a Flo in my life. I think... I don't really know. o_O; Oh, the downside of being an absentminded 'tard. ;)

(Only mistake I noticed was in the second sentence of the second paragraph: You use "guys" instead of "guts." :) Simple typo, nothing horrendous. Woot!)

Very much loved this chapter. ;p Unfortunately, I can't think of anything constructive to say.
4/21/2008 c26 Bompie-Salamanca
...D'AWW.

The last line made me uber-happy. :]

I'm so glad they're friends again. Now, I don't even care if she and Jia are friends, because even in Flo's point of view Jia's kind of...pig-headed.

I love how dumping frappaccinos on people gets forgiveness. If only everything were justified by frozen drink throwing...

Oh, I was psyched for the update, and can't wait for the next chapter.

Sounds like Daphne's gonna go begging Sevin to take her back...at his tennis tournament? I wonder if that spells school-wide humiliation or school-wide PDA...or she just waits it out and confronts him by himself like a good little girl.

CAN'T WAIT,

Bompie-Salamanca
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