
3/15/2012 c31
15Valylene
So, this ended four years ago. While I realize that that's quite a significant gap between the ending of the story and my reading it in this point in time, I felt the desire to boost your average reply per chapter just that little bit more.
I'm really happy I stuck with this and read it. I think you had some really great ideas while writing this four years ago, and that you've created some very unique and dynamic characters here. I like that your story was very realistic in the sense that, once life gets started, it snowballs until it's done. I also think that Daphne had a really strong voice in portraying this to readers-especially the lesson that life isn't a Disney movie. I think it was really fundamental that you mentioned that there is no fairy godmother or singing crab or anything like that to do the hard things for you, and the struggle that comes with weaning yourself off that fantasy. I think you did a fantastic job writing this, and I'm incredibly happy I was able to read it.
Thank you so much for your hard work on writing this.
If you still frequent FP, then I guess I'll see you around. If, by chance, I'm just writing this to someone who isn't, then that's cool, too.
Thanks for the read!

So, this ended four years ago. While I realize that that's quite a significant gap between the ending of the story and my reading it in this point in time, I felt the desire to boost your average reply per chapter just that little bit more.
I'm really happy I stuck with this and read it. I think you had some really great ideas while writing this four years ago, and that you've created some very unique and dynamic characters here. I like that your story was very realistic in the sense that, once life gets started, it snowballs until it's done. I also think that Daphne had a really strong voice in portraying this to readers-especially the lesson that life isn't a Disney movie. I think it was really fundamental that you mentioned that there is no fairy godmother or singing crab or anything like that to do the hard things for you, and the struggle that comes with weaning yourself off that fantasy. I think you did a fantastic job writing this, and I'm incredibly happy I was able to read it.
Thank you so much for your hard work on writing this.
If you still frequent FP, then I guess I'll see you around. If, by chance, I'm just writing this to someone who isn't, then that's cool, too.
Thanks for the read!
2/21/2012 c30 DofD
YES YES YES YES YES! I don't think you know how happy I am right now, I'm like seriously jumping up and down! YEYEYEYEYEYEYY!
YES YES YES YES YES! I don't think you know how happy I am right now, I'm like seriously jumping up and down! YEYEYEYEYEYEYY!