
7/26/2007 c12
5aishling-stone
Yay, relationship drama.
I giggled at the bit that's like, "Hi." "Um." "So. Ben's gay." "Yup." How much more awkward can you get? xD
Write more plzkthxbai.
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I promise never to do that again.

Yay, relationship drama.
I giggled at the bit that's like, "Hi." "Um." "So. Ben's gay." "Yup." How much more awkward can you get? xD
Write more plzkthxbai.
...
I promise never to do that again.
7/20/2007 c12 cherriibomb
this was a great chapter. awesome job re-shuffling.
now it would be even more awesome if you update :)
this was a great chapter. awesome job re-shuffling.
now it would be even more awesome if you update :)
7/17/2007 c12
2remembrance.of.u-4ever.farewel
what happened to the action and Daphne's sarcasm? it got lost. and make daphne kick ryan to the curve and end up with sevin. at least please give me something to hope that they'll end up together.

what happened to the action and Daphne's sarcasm? it got lost. and make daphne kick ryan to the curve and end up with sevin. at least please give me something to hope that they'll end up together.
7/15/2007 c12
2Angel of Ink
well, I definitely think that Ryan = loser. I mean, they're going out for a week, haven't even kissed or gone on a real date yet, and he's already getting paranoid and possessive? NOT cool.

well, I definitely think that Ryan = loser. I mean, they're going out for a week, haven't even kissed or gone on a real date yet, and he's already getting paranoid and possessive? NOT cool.
7/15/2007 c12
5Skeptic-Critic
I actually enjoyed this chapter immensely...It was very amusing...
One question...Is Martin gay?
I love Ben...He's probably one of my fave characters...Poor Sevin...All he wants is Daphne...

I actually enjoyed this chapter immensely...It was very amusing...
One question...Is Martin gay?
I love Ben...He's probably one of my fave characters...Poor Sevin...All he wants is Daphne...
7/15/2007 c11 Skeptic-Critic
Poor Sevin...She's gonna go out with Ryan and he only did that because Ryan's his friend...Poor guy...And he's so sweet...Volunteering to take her home and everything...
Poor Sevin...She's gonna go out with Ryan and he only did that because Ryan's his friend...Poor guy...And he's so sweet...Volunteering to take her home and everything...
7/15/2007 c10 Skeptic-Critic
That would explain why he's been acting like that...I mean, we knew it was 'cuz he liked her but now we know why that made him act funny...'Cuz Ryan likes her too and is trying to get him to set him up with her...
Writing that sentence made my head hurt...
That would explain why he's been acting like that...I mean, we knew it was 'cuz he liked her but now we know why that made him act funny...'Cuz Ryan likes her too and is trying to get him to set him up with her...
Writing that sentence made my head hurt...
7/15/2007 c9 Skeptic-Critic
So...Is Ben openly gay or is she the only one who knows?
Sevin...Grr...What is wrong with him? I just wanna wring his neck...
So...Is Ben openly gay or is she the only one who knows?
Sevin...Grr...What is wrong with him? I just wanna wring his neck...
7/13/2007 c8 Skeptic-Critic
How cute...He made them coffee...And he took her last shot...That was so cute...i love him...
Dude...You got a bunch of chapters out...Where have I been?
How cute...He made them coffee...And he took her last shot...That was so cute...i love him...
Dude...You got a bunch of chapters out...Where have I been?
7/13/2007 c12
2Jessica Renee
I love this story. I don't really have much time to leave a longer review, but I just wanted to comment on that fact and how much I love Daphne and Sevin. :]

I love this story. I don't really have much time to leave a longer review, but I just wanted to comment on that fact and how much I love Daphne and Sevin. :]
7/12/2007 c12 Chowdizzle
To be honest, I have to say that I thought this chapter was a bit boring. But you know what, whatever. I mean, sometimes you gotta have a few boring chapters here and there just to keep the story going. So overall still a good job and keep it up :)
To be honest, I have to say that I thought this chapter was a bit boring. But you know what, whatever. I mean, sometimes you gotta have a few boring chapters here and there just to keep the story going. So overall still a good job and keep it up :)
7/11/2007 c12
1ind-fam
A piece of advice:
Spread the relations a bit. Like give Sevin a girl friend / love interest. Don't make mistakes most writer make, by having every guy rotate around central charecter. After some time the whole story seems Mary Sue-ish.
Keep writing...

A piece of advice:
Spread the relations a bit. Like give Sevin a girl friend / love interest. Don't make mistakes most writer make, by having every guy rotate around central charecter. After some time the whole story seems Mary Sue-ish.
Keep writing...
7/11/2007 c12 nadljfaithglingh
i feel...like i want more sevin action!
but yeah, not a bad chapter :) i'm glad she's working things out with ryan (in a hope-she-ends-up-with-the-other-guy sort of way, lol). oh, and i like ben's character a lot. he's cool beans.
i feel...like i want more sevin action!
but yeah, not a bad chapter :) i'm glad she's working things out with ryan (in a hope-she-ends-up-with-the-other-guy sort of way, lol). oh, and i like ben's character a lot. he's cool beans.