for Disney Gave Me Unrealistic Expectations About Love2/4/2011 c5 Robin Leigh
I'm beginning to like Daphne and Sevin more and more. :D And, call me a cliche lover, but I already figured out who'll end up together. :D
Great story! A couple of typos and stuff, but otherwise everything's fine. :)
I'm beginning to like Daphne and Sevin more and more. :D And, call me a cliche lover, but I already figured out who'll end up together. :D
Great story! A couple of typos and stuff, but otherwise everything's fine. :)
2/4/2011 c2 Robin Leigh
Hello. :) I like the story so far, except for some parts where there were typos or redundancies. :) Other than that, a pretty good job. :D
Hello. :) I like the story so far, except for some parts where there were typos or redundancies. :) Other than that, a pretty good job. :D
1/31/2011 c31 Euphoria Drops
I really enjoyed your story. Despite how long and forever it took for Sevin and Daphne to get together, I thought the pacing was perfect and right for the story. However I am still confused over some things in the story, I don't know if you clarified it already but I was wondering who was Phil(I think that was his name), the guy that would always call for Flo and Sevin would get pissed off at him?
Besides that, I loved the story and I look forward to read more of your stories in the future :)
I really enjoyed your story. Despite how long and forever it took for Sevin and Daphne to get together, I thought the pacing was perfect and right for the story. However I am still confused over some things in the story, I don't know if you clarified it already but I was wondering who was Phil(I think that was his name), the guy that would always call for Flo and Sevin would get pissed off at him?
Besides that, I loved the story and I look forward to read more of your stories in the future :)
1/22/2011 c31 
1Eiya Weathes
Let me just say that this is ONE HELL OF A STORY. I seriously suggested this to my friends and we spent the day reading it together, with our own laptops.
This is just so freaking amazing. I read the entire story twice and I love every character (except Ryan. No offense but me no likey him. I think I like Carla better).
I fell in love with Sevin. He's the cutest little thing I've ever read about and I would hyperventilate just to have a boyfriend like him. He's just so fucking lovable! Gaah!
I love Daphne's quirkiness. It sold the entire story and I just couldn't get enough of her character. She may be stupid when she told Sevin that they couldn't be friends but she reminds me of the little princess in all of us. I mean, don't we all want to be swept off our feet, clad in glass slippers or not?
That's another thing! Your Disney references! So damn cute!
You are amazing and you inspire me. I hope that I would be able to write something like this (without stealing it of course. I'm not a moron). Just, just keep writing!
1Eiya WeathesLet me just say that this is ONE HELL OF A STORY. I seriously suggested this to my friends and we spent the day reading it together, with our own laptops.
This is just so freaking amazing. I read the entire story twice and I love every character (except Ryan. No offense but me no likey him. I think I like Carla better).
I fell in love with Sevin. He's the cutest little thing I've ever read about and I would hyperventilate just to have a boyfriend like him. He's just so fucking lovable! Gaah!
I love Daphne's quirkiness. It sold the entire story and I just couldn't get enough of her character. She may be stupid when she told Sevin that they couldn't be friends but she reminds me of the little princess in all of us. I mean, don't we all want to be swept off our feet, clad in glass slippers or not?
That's another thing! Your Disney references! So damn cute!
You are amazing and you inspire me. I hope that I would be able to write something like this (without stealing it of course. I'm not a moron). Just, just keep writing!
11/19/2010 c31 Hannah J
Oh goodness, where to start?
I just finished this book. You wanna know how I found it? I was thinking about Jasmine's gorgeous hair. I googled "Disney Gave Me Unrealistic Expectations About Hair" and there you were!
Through out the book I was debating on whether or not to write a review, but when I finally saw the note at the end of your last chapter about Aladdin being your favorite movie, I HAD to write to you. I don't have time to critique (Sorry! I gave up finishing an online class to read your book! =D )But I gotta say, you're amazing. You brought together two of the things I can most relate to: Disney and High School.
I don't know if I'll remember to come back and review, but if you get a chance, email me:
Keep Dreaming!
Hannah
Oh goodness, where to start?
I just finished this book. You wanna know how I found it? I was thinking about Jasmine's gorgeous hair. I googled "Disney Gave Me Unrealistic Expectations About Hair" and there you were!
Through out the book I was debating on whether or not to write a review, but when I finally saw the note at the end of your last chapter about Aladdin being your favorite movie, I HAD to write to you. I don't have time to critique (Sorry! I gave up finishing an online class to read your book! =D )But I gotta say, you're amazing. You brought together two of the things I can most relate to: Disney and High School.
I don't know if I'll remember to come back and review, but if you get a chance, email me:
Keep Dreaming!
Hannah
11/11/2010 c31 1WickedSauce
would you, perhaps, write a sequel. I absolutely love this story to pieces and I would kiss your feet if you made a sequel. maybe that's kind of weird, but...
I LOVED IT SO MUCH- still do, as a matter of fact.
1WickedSaucewould you, perhaps, write a sequel. I absolutely love this story to pieces and I would kiss your feet if you made a sequel. maybe that's kind of weird, but...
I LOVED IT SO MUCH- still do, as a matter of fact.
10/31/2010 c2 1Zoius and the Devil
so cliche. and really rushed too. but the writing isn't half bad.
-zozo
1Zoius and the Devilso cliche. and really rushed too. but the writing isn't half bad.
-zozo
8/8/2010 c31 14Wtf-Are-Scrambled-Eggs
Such an amazing story :)
I wish I had a Sevin ! You're a really good writer as well; keep it up!
x
14Wtf-Are-Scrambled-EggsSuch an amazing story :)
I wish I had a Sevin ! You're a really good writer as well; keep it up!
x
7/30/2010 c31 2Septembers
I can relate so much to Daphne, with all the Disney love and stuff (Y)
I LOVE THIS
2SeptembersI can relate so much to Daphne, with all the Disney love and stuff (Y)
I LOVE THIS
7/21/2010 c31 6Lieutenant Starshine
That last review was from me, by the way. I forgot I had an account on here... I just went to your profile and looked at the pictures of your characters for the first time. I kept wanting to do that while I was reading the story, but I would get distracted by how awesome it was. And I totally agree with you that it's awesome when people post character pictures, but most people don't, so I usually forget to check. Anyway, I loved your story to pieces and I'm about to go read your other ones. Peace.
:)
6Lieutenant StarshineThat last review was from me, by the way. I forgot I had an account on here... I just went to your profile and looked at the pictures of your characters for the first time. I kept wanting to do that while I was reading the story, but I would get distracted by how awesome it was. And I totally agree with you that it's awesome when people post character pictures, but most people don't, so I usually forget to check. Anyway, I loved your story to pieces and I'm about to go read your other ones. Peace.
:)
7/21/2010 c31 A Hopeless Romantic
Wow. All I can say is...wow. I'm not anywhere near as articulate as you, but I needed to try and say something. This story fucking blew my mind. I loved every bit of it. I laughed, I cried, and most of all I desperately wanted Sevin to appear out of the story and be in love with ME. This story is just absolutely amazing, and I just wanted to drop a line and say how much I adored reading it. And to thank you for putting it out into the world where I could stumble upon it.
Wow. All I can say is...wow. I'm not anywhere near as articulate as you, but I needed to try and say something. This story fucking blew my mind. I loved every bit of it. I laughed, I cried, and most of all I desperately wanted Sevin to appear out of the story and be in love with ME. This story is just absolutely amazing, and I just wanted to drop a line and say how much I adored reading it. And to thank you for putting it out into the world where I could stumble upon it.
5/26/2010 c31 2InnocentSarcasm
That was the best story i've ever read and i seriously mean it
I cried in this story actual tear drops falling down my tanned cheeks (just to make clear my skin tone is NATRUALLY tan) i really liked it you should write more of these
and as for the last chapter
IT WAS THE BEST HAPPY ENDING
lol for the second last question about tricking us .. aout you knw what
2InnocentSarcasmThat was the best story i've ever read and i seriously mean it
I cried in this story actual tear drops falling down my tanned cheeks (just to make clear my skin tone is NATRUALLY tan) i really liked it you should write more of these
and as for the last chapter
IT WAS THE BEST HAPPY ENDING
lol for the second last question about tricking us .. aout you knw what
5/9/2010 c5 TasteYourSins
Somehow I don't like Alla. Why's she so pissy? I hate pissy people who believe everything they hear. She was piss drunk that time so what gives her the right?
Somehow I don't like Alla. Why's she so pissy? I hate pissy people who believe everything they hear. She was piss drunk that time so what gives her the right?